ShedMoreTears Fairy Tales@Fables"
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Wilfred the Hungry Tick."A delightful Childen Lesson Book.
4 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Ricky, this is a very original write with dialogue that leads the reader easily to the next line with strong meaning and metaphor. Fun and well done! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Ricky, this is a very original write with dialogue that leads the reader easily to the next line with strong meaning and metaphor. Fun and well done! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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"Thanks so much for your well written
comments on this childrens subject dear!"
"There will be another "Shed More
Tears Fairy Tales and Fables called.
"Melinda the Monarch Butterfly"
today Saturday the 30th."
Ricky1024.
Comment from tfawcus
A bizarrely imaginative tale of woe. The farmer's lot is often fraught with hardship but I've never thought of the carry-on consequences further down to food chain. This one sure tick-led my fancy.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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A bizarrely imaginative tale of woe. The farmer's lot is often fraught with hardship but I've never thought of the carry-on consequences further down to food chain. This one sure tick-led my fancy.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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"Thanks so much for your well written
comments on this children"s subject dear!"
"There will be another "Shed More
Tears Fairy Tales and Fables called.
"Melinda the Monarch Butterfly"
today Saturday the 30th."
Ricky1024.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Wow! I enjoyed this well written children's story. It had good rhyming and it flowed pretty well. It tells an interesting story that has a sad ending, followed by one that the kids will love. It held my attention very well, my friend. It was excellent in my opinion.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Wow! I enjoyed this well written children's story. It had good rhyming and it flowed pretty well. It tells an interesting story that has a sad ending, followed by one that the kids will love. It held my attention very well, my friend. It was excellent in my opinion.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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"Thanks so much for your well written
comments on this children"s subject dear!"
"There will be another "Shed More
Tears Fairy Tales and Fables called.
"Melinda the Monarch Butterfly"
today Saturday the 30th."
Ricky1024.
Comment from sibhus
Ha, ha, a very unique short piece, Ricky. Surreal in the telling with a wry sense of humor that makes for an enjoyable read. The ending is some what bizarre and unexpected, but it makes for a very interesting twist to this offbeat little tale.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Ha, ha, a very unique short piece, Ricky. Surreal in the telling with a wry sense of humor that makes for an enjoyable read. The ending is some what bizarre and unexpected, but it makes for a very interesting twist to this offbeat little tale.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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I am finishing it now.
Riicky1024/