Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

I am surrounded by trees and will listen for her frolic in the rustle of the leaves. I join with you in wishing her well. By the way, I see you live in Texas. I hope none of the flooding is near you. I live in SE Louisiana and we are not strangers to high waters.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you very much. I really appreciate your review. I am not in the major floods. We have had rain that causes flash flooding, but so far we are ok. Stay safe.

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

Such a sweet and unaffected poem to our wonderful friend Brooke.
She is indeed an inspiration to many accomplished, and more importantly to new and budding poets as well.
Nice use of rhyme and near-rhyme to convey love in your poem.
Rose.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you so much. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem and the kind comments. Jan

Comment from artisart4u

Excellent

I like your poem about Brooke and wishing her to get well.

Your couplets are nice and well centered.

Good luck with your chapter book.

 Comment Written 28-May-2015

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reply by the author on 28-May-2015

Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem.

Comment from pharp

Excellent

What a beautiful and loving tribute to Brooke. Your kindness, love and warmth is expressed throughout this beautiful poem. I promised as I was reading, it looked as if the trees were moving, maybe because I was tearing up. Let us continue to send up prayers on Brooke's behalf. Blessings my friend Portia

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thank you so much. I, too, see the trees moving. That is why I chose the picture. They look like they were softly swaying.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is so lovely and says what so man of us feel. We love Brooke, miss her, and pray she gets better and returns to us. Beautiful work with this one. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thank you for your time reading/reviewing/ and kind comments. I appreciate all.

Comment from cbat

Excellent

Your offer flows so softly, inviting whispers from someone missed and loved.

Your writing is tops, I enjoy reviewing each time.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

You are so kind. I am glad you liked my poem. Your review means a lot to me. Thank you. Jan

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Jannypan...

- Nice dedication to Brooke.
- Such a lovely lady.
- I hope she's back with us soon.
- I'm pleased to see the great response of posts.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thank you for your time reading and reviewing my poem. I really appreciate it.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is a beautiful tribute, jannypan, you did an excellent job sharing this poem with us as brooke is having her battle. I miss reading her poems as well as her reviews.

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thank you very much. I appreciate your time reading and reviewing my poem.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

this is a lovely message to Brooke well done Jan I do hope Brooke gets well real soon. She will be pleased with all the lovely words of love and admiration sent her way.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thank you. I appreciate your support.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Wonderfully encouraging sentiment in your poem, janny. I think you've captured gracious Brooke's essence and carried it forward through the breeze and the trees. Hear our messages. I'm sure this will bring a big smile to Brooke's face.

Super job!

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-May-2015

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reply by the author on 27-May-2015

Thank you for stopping by to read/review my poem.