Get Well, Brooke!
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "A Dandelion"Writing for Brooke
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Comment from Jean Lutz
I will never look at the simple dandelion again -- each seed will become a word. Thank you for this beautiful contribution to Brooke's FanStory garden. May the words cheer her and hasten her return.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I will never look at the simple dandelion again -- each seed will become a word. Thank you for this beautiful contribution to Brooke's FanStory garden. May the words cheer her and hasten her return.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful review and rating. All of the poems written for Brooke's garden are marvelous. I hope each one brings a smile.
Comment from Treischel
A lovely little well crafted poem about Brooke's Favotite flower/weed the dandelion. I not too sure about the fall, usually the come in spring and seed within a week, but the thought it perfectly expressed.
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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A lovely little well crafted poem about Brooke's Favotite flower/weed the dandelion. I not too sure about the fall, usually the come in spring and seed within a week, but the thought it perfectly expressed.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thank you for the very nice review and excellent rating. A prayer that Brooke will have a full recovery.
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I changed it to spring. Here they seed 3 or 4 times over the season, but mainly in spring. Thanks for the dandelion heads up.
Comment from SueZen
Beautiful poem to Brooke, straight from the heart, your Nature, in subtle, sunny, joyful words/language expressed, full of love and empathy for her. I share her love for dandelions, which are abundant everywhere and adore ! Super picture to emphasize content poem. I Wish Brooke well and look forward to more from your Book...
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Beautiful poem to Brooke, straight from the heart, your Nature, in subtle, sunny, joyful words/language expressed, full of love and empathy for her. I share her love for dandelions, which are abundant everywhere and adore ! Super picture to emphasize content poem. I Wish Brooke well and look forward to more from your Book...
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 28-May-2015
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I tried to put a little bit of Brooke into the poem, her rhymes, her dandelions, her heart. Thank you the exceptional rating. Brooke is the real six stars. Have a wonderful, dandelion day.
Comment from Sasha
Brooke and I often joked about our love of Dandelions, my favorite flower too. I seldom go into the forums and was unaware of how severe her illness is. I pray for her to get well and return to us, she is loved and dearly missed.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Brooke and I often joked about our love of Dandelions, my favorite flower too. I seldom go into the forums and was unaware of how severe her illness is. I pray for her to get well and return to us, she is loved and dearly missed.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. We all pray for her return to health and fanstory.
Comment from zanya
Oh this is a joy to read - the humble dandelion and even some would add, much-maligned !- elevated here and celebrated in all its golden glory and 'a poem for Brooke'.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Oh this is a joy to read - the humble dandelion and even some would add, much-maligned !- elevated here and celebrated in all its golden glory and 'a poem for Brooke'.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you, Zanya, for your beautiful review. It was written for a beautiful person. May it bring her joy.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a terrific poem rs. I love how you've subtly woven in the references to Brooke. When she sees this I can see her smiling big time.
Lovely job, dear friend.
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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This is a terrific poem rs. I love how you've subtly woven in the references to Brooke. When she sees this I can see her smiling big time.
Lovely job, dear friend.
Gloria
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind comments and review. If it brings a smile to Brooke that's really all it needs. Thank you for helping to bring these smiles to her.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a really sweet poem for Brooke :) I love it and am touched by the sentiment. She has inspired so many of us to write here on FanStory. She has touched our lives in a good way. You are wonderful to write this poem to her! I'm out of sixes and I'm sorry.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This is a really sweet poem for Brooke :) I love it and am touched by the sentiment. She has inspired so many of us to write here on FanStory. She has touched our lives in a good way. You are wonderful to write this poem to her! I'm out of sixes and I'm sorry.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments and review. Brooke is my six, I'm simply happy that you read and enjoyed a simple dandelion.
Have a beautiful day.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great get better soon poem. I know it will bring a smile to Brooke. I love the picture. The flow is good. The touches of rhyme and alliteration add to the flow.
Good job. Thank you for your good wishes to a special lady.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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This is a great get better soon poem. I know it will bring a smile to Brooke. I love the picture. The flow is good. The touches of rhyme and alliteration add to the flow.
Good job. Thank you for your good wishes to a special lady.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I've only known Brooke a short while, but even in that short time she touches you with her kindness, generosity and spirit. She told me once her favorite flower was the dandelion. That sounds just like Brooke.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
In this poem, that is a tribute to this writer, "Brooke," your use of descriptive language adds interest to what you have written.
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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In this poem, that is a tribute to this writer, "Brooke," your use of descriptive language adds interest to what you have written.
Comment Written 26-May-2015
reply by the author on 26-May-2015
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Thank you for the comments and rating. :)