Can Love Be Measured
a three word challenge poem15 total reviews
Comment from jlsavell
Good morning Jewel,
It is soo good to see you again. You my friend, have such a beautiful gift of expression. This poem dances off the page with such exquisite fluidity, like ribboned smooth chocolate. It sentiment timeless and breathtaking.
Loved it! How is the weather in my most favorite place?
Jimi
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Good morning Jewel,
It is soo good to see you again. You my friend, have such a beautiful gift of expression. This poem dances off the page with such exquisite fluidity, like ribboned smooth chocolate. It sentiment timeless and breathtaking.
Loved it! How is the weather in my most favorite place?
Jimi
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hi sweet Jimi!! Thank you!!
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning Jewell
A very good challenge and great idea
I enjoyed your wonderful poem and like the new pic of you as well
I hope you are doing great these days.
Please come over and say hello when you have time.
Loyd
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Good morning Jewell
A very good challenge and great idea
I enjoyed your wonderful poem and like the new pic of you as well
I hope you are doing great these days.
Please come over and say hello when you have time.
Loyd
Comment Written 25-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks!!
Comment from danpald
Beauty fills the poem this night
From the words touch just right
How can true love be measured
When it is never gathered
Love is something that must grow
With the art of being full
When love does become a part of life
It can be measured only with the human heart
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Beauty fills the poem this night
From the words touch just right
How can true love be measured
When it is never gathered
Love is something that must grow
With the art of being full
When love does become a part of life
It can be measured only with the human heart
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Amen. Thank you!
Comment from Diny
As always dearest one- You knock it out of the park!- Great metaphorical images and examples- Great expressions of emotions and thoughts just great like you are!
Write ON!- immeasurable you!
Diny
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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As always dearest one- You knock it out of the park!- Great metaphorical images and examples- Great expressions of emotions and thoughts just great like you are!
Write ON!- immeasurable you!
Diny
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks sweet soul! We gotta catch up!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Appears you met his challenge well. Easy to follow story line. Plenty of smooth flowing action. Descriptive language used well throughout.
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Appears you met his challenge well. Easy to follow story line. Plenty of smooth flowing action. Descriptive language used well throughout.
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Why thank u, Brett.
Comment from TimBee
very well done, Poetic Visionary. You clearly were up to the task. Indeed, I was drawn in and could sense the love. "No distance in time can measure the love".
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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very well done, Poetic Visionary. You clearly were up to the task. Indeed, I was drawn in and could sense the love. "No distance in time can measure the love".
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Amen!! Thanks, Bro!
Comment from Jacob Collins
I enjoyed reading this piece, Poetic Visionary. I liked the imagery you used throughout and I thought that your writing was very well written and cleverly constructed. I couldn't find anything to critique. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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I enjoyed reading this piece, Poetic Visionary. I liked the imagery you used throughout and I thought that your writing was very well written and cleverly constructed. I couldn't find anything to critique. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thanks
Comment from TPAC
You are Super Bad yes Poet drives nails in death coffin ending assumptions and countless cats fears of many reminding reader "All you need is Love" Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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You are Super Bad yes Poet drives nails in death coffin ending assumptions and countless cats fears of many reminding reader "All you need is Love" Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Thank you!
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your "doodle art" and the way you seamlessly wove in the three words. You met the challenge well! Yes, "Love truly is the treasure we have been searching for". Cheers- Joan, from sun-soaked Seville
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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I relished your "doodle art" and the way you seamlessly wove in the three words. You met the challenge well! Yes, "Love truly is the treasure we have been searching for". Cheers- Joan, from sun-soaked Seville
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Bless you Joan!
Comment from xotic flotsam
A challenging write. Love we choose not. Those we love we choose not. Those who love us, we choose not. Were but that it be so focused and mapped out. Of course, we'd all have Vulcan ears. Love swirls kaleidoscopic emotion pulling us into its joyous mayhem. We remain the only sentient critters on earth, regardless of how stunningly competent critters become. They may mate for life. That is not love. It is protection for the family. Love transcends thinking, elevating hearts into an unknown ethereal kaleidoscope, the outcome of which we cannot know. Those who claim imperiousness have yet to encounter the firebrand who melts their unsound,vulnerable cold logic. You have seamlessly woven the occasional cliché seamlessly into your piece. Tough write, well done. Be well.
x
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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A challenging write. Love we choose not. Those we love we choose not. Those who love us, we choose not. Were but that it be so focused and mapped out. Of course, we'd all have Vulcan ears. Love swirls kaleidoscopic emotion pulling us into its joyous mayhem. We remain the only sentient critters on earth, regardless of how stunningly competent critters become. They may mate for life. That is not love. It is protection for the family. Love transcends thinking, elevating hearts into an unknown ethereal kaleidoscope, the outcome of which we cannot know. Those who claim imperiousness have yet to encounter the firebrand who melts their unsound,vulnerable cold logic. You have seamlessly woven the occasional cliché seamlessly into your piece. Tough write, well done. Be well.
x
Comment Written 24-May-2015
reply by the author on 24-May-2015
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Wow! Thank you so very much for a fabulous response. I always enjoy your wisdom!
The six stars an added treat!