Subdued
a 5-7-53 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
Lovely photo that complements your little poem perfectly. About a lighthouse in the fog and how people can die if the lighthouse is not to be seen. 5-7-5 poem, dot on syllable count. One tip I would suggest centring it for a better layout.
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Lovely photo that complements your little poem perfectly. About a lighthouse in the fog and how people can die if the lighthouse is not to be seen. 5-7-5 poem, dot on syllable count. One tip I would suggest centring it for a better layout.
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you, Ine, for the review and help. Bill
Comment from TPAC
Serene. Poet in statements grips reader taking them swiftly on journey an adventure as poet states "fog...night...rocks...and death" Well done very gifted talent with creative insights Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Serene. Poet in statements grips reader taking them swiftly on journey an adventure as poet states "fog...night...rocks...and death" Well done very gifted talent with creative insights Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you, TPAC, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Bill,
Interesting piece here in this three line poem.
A beacon of light and saviour dulled, muted and made ineffectual by the murk, leading to destruction and death. Hmm.. deeper meanings.
Very nicely constructed piece.
Liked it
GMG
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hi Bill,
Interesting piece here in this three line poem.
A beacon of light and saviour dulled, muted and made ineffectual by the murk, leading to destruction and death. Hmm.. deeper meanings.
Very nicely constructed piece.
Liked it
GMG
Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you, g, for the excellent review. Bill