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Shucking the weight of old ways.

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Comment from BlueMarble
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Wonderful. I didn't know what to expect from this style poetry. It's all new to me, I had no idea it was possible to say so much as well as you said it. I love this poem - best of luck with it.

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This nonet, sold on change, does all it should do as in the syllable area, and manages to keep a mono-rhyme throughout as well. The message seems to be FINALLY FREE TO BE ME.

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

reply by the author on 21-May-2015
    That's the message. Thanks for reviewing.