Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Welcome to FanStory from Down Under--I hope the site fulfills your goals for membership.

Thank you for sharing your reflections about the dominance of "time". I admired your alternating rhymes in these quatrains with a riddle quality. Your use of the first person and personification added to the intensity of your message. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thank you Joan I have only joined recently and find this very addictive but oh so exciting not doing too much else lately and have loved reading the wonderful poem posted I' m glad you enjoyed my poem and I appreciate your thoughtful comments Cheers Christine 😃

reply by Joan E. on 18-May-2015

Addictive--yes! But write on and keep sharing- Joan

Comment from pharp

Exceptional

WOW! Christine, your really did penned this one. An exceptionally well written poem. The flow, rhyming and rhythm outstanding and the message awesome. Thanks for sharing keep it up. Portia

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thank you so much Portia I wrote this ages ago but thought I would post it. So glad you enjoyed the style and rhythm and also for the great rating I am very excited and have enjoyed this site. I look forward to sharing both ways Cheers Christine😃😃

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

And time slows down for no one. You can't stop it or change it. Poem tells a good tale about this idea from this writer.

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Thank you Brett, for reviewing this poem I wrote a a while ago. A little differnt from my other ones and yes time is just keeps marching on and we have to adapt cheers Christinethank you so muchPortia

Comment from lalajovanoski

Exceptional

Amazing write! Well worthy of a six star rating. Inspiring, deep,and exceptionally well composed. Very relatable and emotional. Thank you very much for sharing I found this to be excellent. Keep on writing!

 Comment Written 17-May-2015

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reply by the author on 17-May-2015

Wow ! thank you so much for you great comments and rating although I have written all my life I have never really shared it on a public forum until I found this site and have now also read some great and inspiring poems and have enjoyed the interactions my first 6 star I am stoked and so glad you enjoyed this view of TIME Cheers Christine😃