Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

My goodness, he's a big one! lol
Your poetic taunts say a lot about how many people perceive the obese. They do live a sad life; many can't get through a door and if they lay flat they could stop breathing from the weight. It's a major event to remove the body when they die.

:) e

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015

Glad you enjoyed this little ditty.

Comment from donalola

Excellent

This was fun to read. Every time I go shopping for food I am surprised at how many fat asses are there. It could not be all hormonal, could it? I started checking their carts and there was the answer!
Yes, I loved it!
Thanks for sharing this with us!
Donalola

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 21-May-2015

Written just for laughs. Thanks for your comments.

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

Hi Brett. I see you have a cheeky sense of humour. Clever rhyming on an unusual subject. Fat ass Fat ass Eating all the time They could land a jet plane on your behind - ha ha. Love the picture of the cupcakes ..yum yum

cheers
Annette

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 21-May-2015

Written only for laughs. Thanks for your comments.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

haha. lol. i'm overweight but do not find this insulting. although it does bring back memories from childhood i'd sooner forget:) i'm wondering which contest is this for because it doesn't show any competition?
thank you for sharing dear brett!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 21-May-2015

Thanks for your comments and support. This was written only to illicit laughs nothing more.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Went into the Hitching Post for a sub and there was a rack of Fat Bastard wine.
Have lost two or three acquaintances over the decades to morbid obesity-a bad way to go-but you know, ya laugh or ya cry. Interesting post, if informal.

 Comment Written 18-May-2015

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reply by the author on 19-May-2015

Written solely for the fun of it. Thanks for your comments.

Comment from Gunner Lil

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this very much. An easy read with a good pace.
You painted a fine picture with your words,
I could see a very large rear-end walking down the hallway.
Thank you.

 Comment Written 16-May-2015

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reply by the author on 16-May-2015

All written for the fun of it. Glad you enjoyed this little ditty.

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

Even trying to look at this with a light-heart attitude it hurts I hurt for the obese person I am there with him hearing the taunts
It was written in fun but there is no fun around eating disorders
The flow and the words are well penned and I have given you a five because it is the work I am here to review not my personal feelings. For the work I say well done

 Comment Written 15-May-2015

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reply by the author on 15-May-2015

If you see that in this piece of garbage I wrote for fun you are over reacting and read way too much into this one. Thanks for your comments though.

reply by petalangela on 15-May-2015

Yep probably I wrote a garbage fun thing and was accused by someone of writing rubbish and slapping faith in the face. ... I thought it was a fair review apart from the odd personal comment the review said it was good good write

Comment from sandragee

Excellent

Are some people going to be insulted? Yes. Is the poem stinging, sarcastic, and just a little insensitive? Yes, yes, yes. But it is also humorous and well-written. Good job. Also I want to thank you for the image your words conjured up for me of a plane landing on a fat ass's ass.

 Comment Written 13-May-2015

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reply by the author on 13-May-2015

Thanks for your comments.

Comment from cbat

Excellent

I give you five stars because you earned them.
I confess to having a problem with the star thing, it feels in- sincere because even my grammar teacher gave five stars for assignments 50% wrong.
Not to say, a reviewer does not have to be mean to put a point over.

I have much of my life been a "Fat Ass," in more ways than one.

I have chosen to speak the truth and do what I can to change.
Points are not why I am here.

 Comment Written 13-May-2015

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reply by the author on 13-May-2015

The points on this site, and the review system itself, in my opinion sucks! Thanks. You review somebody's work and give an honest review, and I don't know about you but I have been threatened, cussed out, screamed at, and several other things by writers who's work wasn't even really a 4-Star piece, although that is the score I gave them, because I did not give them a 5-Star review. Almost makes me want to quit reviewing.

reply by cbat on 13-May-2015

For myself I hope you do not stop reviewing.
Just reading your personal thoughts made me search out your writing.
As long as someone is not brutal, I want mistakes pointed out.
Writing is therapy.

Comment from Autumn Splendour

Excellent

What a hilarious poem. Good thing you wrote the disclaimer or you will have the world's Fat Asses after you. LOL.
My favorite stanza:

"Fat Ass. Fat Ass.
Don't you sit on me.
Should be 200 not a thousand-three.
A piano will be your coffin there is no doubt.
unless of course you eat your way out."
Amusing poems are so fun to write. I know because I write them too.

 Comment Written 13-May-2015

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reply by the author on 13-May-2015

Thanks for your comments.