Act of Endurance
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Comment from benoenose
A luxury and travel story narrated in poem form expresses the style of the author. To feel a tragic situation the style of poem is exemplary. Read by all those love travel poems.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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A luxury and travel story narrated in poem form expresses the style of the author. To feel a tragic situation the style of poem is exemplary. Read by all those love travel poems.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
What you said I feel frightened never thought about someone traveling reading this work, a big chill, I know I wouldn't want to cross it while I was traveling on a ship I thank you for generous rate and well received comments
Comment from Chrissy710
I thought this was a really great read and so busy and filled with such description of the excitement of the voyage to the first ignored warning to the peril of sinking. I could almost see this story unfolding by you well chosen words and story construct. Well done Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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I thought this was a really great read and so busy and filled with such description of the excitement of the voyage to the first ignored warning to the peril of sinking. I could almost see this story unfolding by you well chosen words and story construct. Well done Cheers Christine
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
Wow I thought they took away most six away, see you found one of them, thanks for all the above, hope my fans aren't disappointed in me, I never had fans, excepts those to cool me before buying air conditioner, I would weep but I'm a rock, trying to be invisible -exposed
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, tpac, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the horror of a ship capsizing in the ocean, losing so much life. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent write, tpac, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the horror of a ship capsizing in the ocean, losing so much life. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
Had to punch this work a lot, fully dazed, I'm-m glad to hear I won Do appreciate all
Comment from Jean Lutz
Sad that so many looked forward to this voyage -- never once thinking it might be their last. You told the story in fine poetic form and I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Sad that so many looked forward to this voyage -- never once thinking it might be their last. You told the story in fine poetic form and I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
Rough draft didn't make the contest win, but I am getting a thrill seeing this work bloom Appreciate your generous rate and warm thoughts
Comment from emkoutny
I learned about this disaster from your poem. I tend to turn off to bad news-there is just too much of it. At first i thought it might be about the titanic, but it is different. I think it shows how life can change in an instant.
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
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I learned about this disaster from your poem. I tend to turn off to bad news-there is just too much of it. At first i thought it might be about the titanic, but it is different. I think it shows how life can change in an instant.
Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 11-May-2015
Definitely statement in poem is profound: you struck my aimed target Be on watch consistently. Too, many mishaps for me, at Downing Stadium got caught up in crowd panics, this was one of three, and by that particular event, a concert in Harlem, beautiful people and giving crowd, things changed. Crowd panic when speaker play galloping horse music. Stampede Rare Earth open concert performances, only saw two Thanking for your far too generous rates and on target insights of one aspect of Endurance
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Thank you for nominating me for my review! I was so surprised and pleasantly so. Muchas gracias!
Comment from jaded831
I'm not a fan of long poems, because I tend to lose interest, but your poem kept me interested, and stopped me from moving on to the next poem. Well done and truly a contender.
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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I'm not a fan of long poems, because I tend to lose interest, but your poem kept me interested, and stopped me from moving on to the next poem. Well done and truly a contender.
Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Thanking you for your encouraging comments about long poem interest Glad my work somewhat above those average .500 alright These generous rates for free verse overwhelm me, I'm use to three or maybe four Bless day
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Did you know that men and boys were prevented from boarding lifeboats from the sinking Titanic at gunpoint? Poem flows smoothly throughout. Well written. Write on.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2015
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Did you know that men and boys were prevented from boarding lifeboats from the sinking Titanic at gunpoint? Poem flows smoothly throughout. Well written. Write on.
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Comment Written 10-May-2015
reply by the author on 10-May-2015
Alliance again terrorizing so called humanity, with such consistent acts throughout time, throughout decades. No I didn't know that, add one more to my memory of them and coming sorrows. Same occurred in Katrina Thank you for over generous rate with informative insights
