Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Celebrate Your Leaving"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
46 total reviews
Comment from jmshumate
This is a good write, with a nice flow to it. It tells the story of someone who chooses to be a drunk over a woman, the only problem, I have is that it's not very original, but rather generic, it reminds me of a typical country song, but it is well written.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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This is a good write, with a nice flow to it. It tells the story of someone who chooses to be a drunk over a woman, the only problem, I have is that it's not very original, but rather generic, it reminds me of a typical country song, but it is well written.
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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Glad it reminds you of a Country song because that is exactly what it is, and, yes, it is quite original. I wrote it myself thank you.
Comment from cbat
Again five stars.
As you know you have talent, and will continue to write.
So here is another reason why I do what I do.
Another reason I do not have advice for someone when I find something to be less than five is that I am not qualified to tell someone where the mistakes are.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Again five stars.
As you know you have talent, and will continue to write.
So here is another reason why I do what I do.
Another reason I do not have advice for someone when I find something to be less than five is that I am not qualified to tell someone where the mistakes are.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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I have all but decided to stop reviewing any more writings myself.
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Is this because of people such as I?
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Nope. It is because I am tired of being cussed out, yelled at, and threatened every time I give a 4-Star review for writings that are ripe with typos, need further development, and simply are not worthy of a 5-Star review, and will not change the 4-Star to a 5-Star simply because the writer demands I do so. If you wrote something and I thought it was less than a 5-Star I would rate it as such with no hesitation. Not being mean spirited simply trying to point out where improvements can be made.
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The piece from girffmang titled,
575 words of Gratitude, shows why you are needed.
I only have SPAGS.
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Think I will post a message that from now on I will only review a person's writing if they ask me to do so directly. Not worth the stress I am enduring otherwise. At least that is my current thought.
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I will give you points if you review mine, warning I am OCD or is that CDO?
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Write on and send me a note when you publish something. I will review yours, but I will do so exactly as I would anybody else's too. Fair enough?
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Entirely, although I probably will never publish.
Have a good day.
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You better publish something on this site. Will be looking for it.
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I have much on site, but mine are true not much imagination, and always full of mistakes.
Chamber pots & Pj's is general idea.
Cbat
Comment from Alan K Pease
A poem that tells me that I am glad I never been in that situation. But you do make some poignant moments that I can concur that were possible. The poetics are excellent.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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A poem that tells me that I am glad I never been in that situation. But you do make some poignant moments that I can concur that were possible. The poetics are excellent.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from angelface2
This is a well written poem It has good rhythm. It does tell a sad story, though. In one place you say I don't know why I ever let you go, then say let's celebrate you are gone. That is kind of contradictory, but I suppose you can feel both ways. I do like the picture. That is the way I would celebrate! :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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This is a well written poem It has good rhythm. It does tell a sad story, though. In one place you say I don't know why I ever let you go, then say let's celebrate you are gone. That is kind of contradictory, but I suppose you can feel both ways. I do like the picture. That is the way I would celebrate! :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thank you for your comments.
Comment from TPAC
Wonderful expressions in verse, Tells story of problem victim whom ignores situation through spirits. Poet has many ingredients in the work and illustrates all well. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Wonderful expressions in verse, Tells story of problem victim whom ignores situation through spirits. Poet has many ingredients in the work and illustrates all well. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from Glasstruth
Sounds like someone numbing the pain of a death. The celebration is sort of ironic, in that the person is celebrating that he/she has made without the other, but then is drowning in the whiskey. Nice flow and reads smoothly. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Sounds like someone numbing the pain of a death. The celebration is sort of ironic, in that the person is celebrating that he/she has made without the other, but then is drowning in the whiskey. Nice flow and reads smoothly. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Don't forget he also has a fair in town he is then going to. It is definitely time to celebrate! Thanks for your comments.
Comment from Fridayauthor
Trying to forget the liquid way, set to song-verse. You can almost visualize this guy and you certainly can see where he is going.
I like the picture but it looks like a lot more fun than he is having.
Good posting.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Trying to forget the liquid way, set to song-verse. You can almost visualize this guy and you certainly can see where he is going.
I like the picture but it looks like a lot more fun than he is having.
Good posting.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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He is celebrating by slamming a few back then going to the fair. Thanks for your comments.
Comment from LIJ Red
Break out the bottle, pop a top again, misery loves company, set 'em up Joe- is this a new theme? With a little slapknock on the meter, this could be great.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Break out the bottle, pop a top again, misery loves company, set 'em up Joe- is this a new theme? With a little slapknock on the meter, this could be great.
Excellent.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from TAB_that's me
My ex-husband celebrating my leaving him after 30 years by getting a girlfriend the next week! Party-on! Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
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My ex-husband celebrating my leaving him after 30 years by getting a girlfriend the next week! Party-on! Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
This is a great expression of trying to forget, but not wanting to.
This is human. Life goes on and we need strength to carry on.
A very well expressed piece of emotion.
Clear straight and saying the most important thing.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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This is a great expression of trying to forget, but not wanting to.
This is human. Life goes on and we need strength to carry on.
A very well expressed piece of emotion.
Clear straight and saying the most important thing.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
