Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Beautiful poem crisp imagination all the proper ingredients; but I like instead of "is" meaning nothing but my view "glow" this bring back a double clarity to first line. Both placement fulfill Thanking you for sharing

 Comment Written 07-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

good suggestion,
thank you for the review :)
gypsy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Nice presentation. I love the green font. Good job with the syllable count. The picture is awesome.

I see no changes. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Jannypan, thank you so much for the excelletn review and your kind words, I really appreciate them. :)

gypsy

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I love this miniature delight...but part of me thinks of bound feet and yearning to tell this Juniper to break free
Smash open that pot and live large...be a shelter to birds...give your oil to help bursitis ..sorry I just hear Freddy Mercury singing I WANT TO BREAK FREE
God bless

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

wow! thank you Kiwijenny, for the excellent review and kind words. :)

gypsy

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I love this bonsai plants but i can't seem to grow them - they always die. Great nature 5-7-5 in perfect form. good luck.

Teresa

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Teresa, thank you so much for the excellent review and kind words.

gypsy :)