Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Eggs Over Easy"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
30 total reviews
Comment from I am Cat
Too funny!
I haven't read this one before this for reasons which aren't important... but I generally stay away from "food" based anything... (former eating disorder leftover (ha ha, she said leftovers) hangups)... but anyway, I saw it was you, and so I stopped in to read this and i"m glad that I did.
I got a chuckle and I couldn't help noticing the anatomy of the eggs... (which sort of made me more uneasy than over easy) but anyway... lol
I thought it was delightful, and written in a wonderfully witty ditty way that only you can master.
Well done and congratulations on winning your contest! lol
Cat
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Too funny!
I haven't read this one before this for reasons which aren't important... but I generally stay away from "food" based anything... (former eating disorder leftover (ha ha, she said leftovers) hangups)... but anyway, I saw it was you, and so I stopped in to read this and i"m glad that I did.
I got a chuckle and I couldn't help noticing the anatomy of the eggs... (which sort of made me more uneasy than over easy) but anyway... lol
I thought it was delightful, and written in a wonderfully witty ditty way that only you can master.
Well done and congratulations on winning your contest! lol
Cat
Comment Written 06-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an extraordinary piece of lyric poetry and certainly a worthy winner in the contest.
Well done Brett. I like your refrain lines and it is so well worded. Great job and congratulations on the win.
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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This is an extraordinary piece of lyric poetry and certainly a worthy winner in the contest.
Well done Brett. I like your refrain lines and it is so well worded. Great job and congratulations on the win.
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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Comment from Green Lake Girl
Congratulations on winning this contest. Super photo--did you choose it to remind your readers of the old flame's ta-ta's? :) The poem reads like lyrics--interesting to put it to music. A fast song or a slow song? Nicely done.
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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Congratulations on winning this contest. Super photo--did you choose it to remind your readers of the old flame's ta-ta's? :) The poem reads like lyrics--interesting to put it to music. A fast song or a slow song? Nicely done.
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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They are lyrics. i do not write poems.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett...
Excellent win. Easy to see why. Nice easy, natural flowing poem. You really did a super job with your interpretation of the the prompt.
The repetition of the last two lines really keeps it pulled together while adding a certain punch.
Enjoyed the read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Hi, Brett...
Excellent win. Easy to see why. Nice easy, natural flowing poem. You really did a super job with your interpretation of the the prompt.
The repetition of the last two lines really keeps it pulled together while adding a certain punch.
Enjoyed the read.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support. A Fanstorian challenged me to write a Country song about food, something I had never even thought about doing before, and "Eggs Over Easy" was just there.
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Well, you wrote it very well. It was a worthy win. (*?*)
Comment from royowen
Well done with this one, it certainly follows the normal theme of a country song, these lyrics are certainly very sad, I tend to write rhyming/rhythmic poetry to music, it's already got a beat, but their can be this type, but the verses need to be uniform, your hook is the repetitive last two lines! Well done, beautifully composed lyrics, congratulations, my friend, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Well done with this one, it certainly follows the normal theme of a country song, these lyrics are certainly very sad, I tend to write rhyming/rhythmic poetry to music, it's already got a beat, but their can be this type, but the verses need to be uniform, your hook is the repetitive last two lines! Well done, beautifully composed lyrics, congratulations, my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Comment from TPAC
I see beauty. Even sung the words. No expert of lyric expressions, having written one attempt: believe Donnie Brook song 45 record Beware Young Man. I guess standard chorus is expected in a song; but too much seem over kill. I see spots which goodbyes under different perspectives, near end of song, could open golden opportunities. I like it, very much. Great song, best wishes
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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I see beauty. Even sung the words. No expert of lyric expressions, having written one attempt: believe Donnie Brook song 45 record Beware Young Man. I guess standard chorus is expected in a song; but too much seem over kill. I see spots which goodbyes under different perspectives, near end of song, could open golden opportunities. I like it, very much. Great song, best wishes
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Comment from alexisleech
Excellent! I can easily understand why this was a winner. The lyrics tell a story, the repeated chorus is both entertaining and appropriate, and it all spilled off the page in a melodic way.
Well done!
Alexis x
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Excellent! I can easily understand why this was a winner. The lyrics tell a story, the repeated chorus is both entertaining and appropriate, and it all spilled off the page in a melodic way.
Well done!
Alexis x
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Comment from inside echo
Very well written. The story you tell speaks of love, the love of two women, one you had, and one that just wandered back. You incorporated the food aspect appropriately and fitting to your poem. Through you words you allow the reader to feel your confusion and your struggle, and your loss. It is written to almost force the reader to keep reading to find out the rest of your story. Being able to captivate and hold a reader is a great quality of a writer. Very well done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
echo
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Very well written. The story you tell speaks of love, the love of two women, one you had, and one that just wandered back. You incorporated the food aspect appropriately and fitting to your poem. Through you words you allow the reader to feel your confusion and your struggle, and your loss. It is written to almost force the reader to keep reading to find out the rest of your story. Being able to captivate and hold a reader is a great quality of a writer. Very well done. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
echo
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you for your comments.
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You are most welcome
Comment from seaglass
This made me chuckle as it reminded me of several people, both men and women whose self absorbed perspectives ended their relationships, and they grieved in this very way...looking out for number one.
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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This made me chuckle as it reminded me of several people, both men and women whose self absorbed perspectives ended their relationships, and they grieved in this very way...looking out for number one.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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Thanks for your comments.
Comment from c_lucas
When a relationship falls apart and crumbles, it is time to start anew. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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When a relationship falls apart and crumbles, it is time to start anew. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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You're welcome.
