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Patriotism

My looks at Patriotism

5 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Your acrostic is well presented with a simple and straightforward theme, but there is no mistaking the message of patriotism. Good job. Marilyn/BeasPeas

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
    Thank you BeasPeas!!...I was out of my league here :)
    Always,
    Justafan
    Missy
reply by BeasPeas on 29-Apr-2015
    This contest had some very good entries. Yours was one of them. Marilyn
Comment from RYME4U
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This is a well done acrostic. Very well presented with an endearing message of patriotism and loyalty. A proud message is painted by your words. Great job

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 28-Apr-2015
    Ryme4u, thank you so much for such a great review. Poetry is not really my genre, but I wanted to try. Again, Thank you :)

    Always,
    Justafan
    Missy
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Picture definitely illustrates this poem well. Action flows well. Message easy to follow. Know these aren't easy things for me to tell you at the moment because it is my contest suggestion and I am also entered into this contest, but this is my honest review and I would give it to you just like this even if I wasn't entered or if it wasn't my contest suggestion. Well done. Write on.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
    Rut ro!!!....Thank you, Brett...I wasn't sure it met the contest rules! And now to see that its your contest...how I missed that I don't know..grrr...It means a great deal that you decided to review this work...I am smiling!
    Always,
    Missy
Comment from petalangela
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A good stance on being patriotic... Perhaps this should also extend to laws of justice freedom and human rights do not stand all over those either.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
    Agreed!!

    Missy
Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic, Patriotism, is put together in a way to promote enthusiasm and show the attitude of Americans when it comes to showing it. All around good looking display.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2015

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
    I am blushing here...Thank you Bill!

    Missy