Tiny Terrors
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Operation Scream"A collection of short horror fiction
2 total reviews
Comment from lolamanda55
Negatives: Not detailed, not complete, too short, not scary and boring.
Positives: used big words, good vocabulary, descriptive.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Negatives: Not detailed, not complete, too short, not scary and boring.
Positives: used big words, good vocabulary, descriptive.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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It is flash fiction, it's supposed to be short.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your presentation is wonderful. I think this is strong - great final line. However, I think this would be stronger if you had a little more information. A little confusion perhaps about why he is on the table. Some background. Great job overall.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Your presentation is wonderful. I think this is strong - great final line. However, I think this would be stronger if you had a little more information. A little confusion perhaps about why he is on the table. Some background. Great job overall.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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It's flash fiction. It is supposed to be brief.