My Simple Little Ode To FanStory
My experiences on FanStory after only 2 months of being here6 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem makes super sense. I enjoyed reading it. I have not seen your profile page before, so I stopped to take a look. This poem has great flow and rhyme. I like what you say about reviews. Yes, some are tough. But in the end, reviews can and do help one to grow.
Good job with this one. I have been with FS since July 2014 and only have 2 recognized works, So good job with your first at such a short time. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Your poem makes super sense. I enjoyed reading it. I have not seen your profile page before, so I stopped to take a look. This poem has great flow and rhyme. I like what you say about reviews. Yes, some are tough. But in the end, reviews can and do help one to grow.
Good job with this one. I have been with FS since July 2014 and only have 2 recognized works, So good job with your first at such a short time. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2015
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Thank you. In 2 months I now have 7 All Time Bests lyrics posted on this site as well. Check them out some time.
Comment from valerieellis
Excellent! I love the bit of humor. I am glad you joined Fan Story and very glad our paths have crossed. I enjoy your writings! It is nice to see you can write from different angles...sad, love stories, spiritual, humor, and reality. Very well done! God bless :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Excellent! I love the bit of humor. I am glad you joined Fan Story and very glad our paths have crossed. I enjoy your writings! It is nice to see you can write from different angles...sad, love stories, spiritual, humor, and reality. Very well done! God bless :)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and support. Appreciate them a whole lot.
Comment from danpald
This site I agree is a pleasing victory
For to have the reward of so many reading free
They give their all to your sincerity
Leaving you comments that inspire your sanity
Each review I write is a poem as well
For the poets do inspire so well
Each with their own tales from the heart
Give rise to the muse that is never far apart
So thank you for this Ode to Fan story
That is given for all the poets glory
As well to the writers of so many forms
To give them a place to bring forth inner moans
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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This site I agree is a pleasing victory
For to have the reward of so many reading free
They give their all to your sincerity
Leaving you comments that inspire your sanity
Each review I write is a poem as well
For the poets do inspire so well
Each with their own tales from the heart
Give rise to the muse that is never far apart
So thank you for this Ode to Fan story
That is given for all the poets glory
As well to the writers of so many forms
To give them a place to bring forth inner moans
Comment Written 12-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the poem and your comments. Appreciate them.
Comment from meggie13
You have written a very detailed and supportive ode about Fan story. This is a large friendly site which will help you be the best you can be. This is a good advertisement for it since there are others looking for a place to improve their writing skills . It rhymes well and has good flow.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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You have written a very detailed and supportive ode about Fan story. This is a large friendly site which will help you be the best you can be. This is a good advertisement for it since there are others looking for a place to improve their writing skills . It rhymes well and has good flow.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your ode very much.
-The poem flows very well and tells a very nice story.
-You write with a very nice style that is very unique.
-You also write honestly and from the heart, and it comes through very well in your poem.
-Below I took some of the lines that could use some grammatical corrections.
I read your author notes and am hoping you find them useful.
-Said, "what is this stuff?"
- I did go, typing
-"Daddy When You Coming Home"
- an Excellent one, too
-Entered me a contest, got one tiny vote.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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-I like your ode very much.
-The poem flows very well and tells a very nice story.
-You write with a very nice style that is very unique.
-You also write honestly and from the heart, and it comes through very well in your poem.
-Below I took some of the lines that could use some grammatical corrections.
I read your author notes and am hoping you find them useful.
-Said, "what is this stuff?"
- I did go, typing
-"Daddy When You Coming Home"
- an Excellent one, too
-Entered me a contest, got one tiny vote.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments. Appreciate them.
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You are welcome.
Comment from kiwijenny
I liked your board of education post. And I like this ode to Fanstory
I love this site it has built my confidence to write...that simple ingredient these wonderful friends on here supplied,,,I love the friendships here
God bless
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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I liked your board of education post. And I like this ode to Fanstory
I love this site it has built my confidence to write...that simple ingredient these wonderful friends on here supplied,,,I love the friendships here
God bless
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you very much. Appreciate your support for both.