Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Coral. Well my fine friend, I have to say that I think this is the first time I have not sent you a spag alert, so given that result and reading your notes and then comparing the two, I say that your poetry is coming along just fine! Crikey that was anylytical (how ever it's spelled) of me and I can't even count. Great stuff, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 08-May-2015

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reply by the author on 08-May-2015

I need all the SPAG alerts you can give.

Thank you.

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Sounds like an addiction is going on here with all these pills being taken for every little thing. Verses fit together nicely. Write on.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

You are so right!

Thank you for your review.

Comment from BlueMarble

Excellent

Pills and bills for pills aren't fun, but your poem is. It flows along with a fun bouncy rhythm and perfectly describes why I stay away from doctors. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Thank's

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Cbat...

This is a good free verse. Anything goes with this style. Pills indeed, seem to run one's life these days for sure.

Perfect description of a 'pill' day.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Thank's again.

Comment from benoenose

Excellent

Simple to the point poetry. Love to read the effect of medicine in ones today's life. The poet enjoys the prescription of the bills so heavy.
Recommended for doctors and patients.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

Thank you for your kind review.