Easter
Jesus weeps for reprieve.19 total reviews
Comment from tgoodrich1016
Beautiful poetry about our Savior, Jesus the Christ. Thank you for helping us remember the true meaning of Easter.
I can certainly see why you were awarded a ribbon of recognition. I am just an amateur poet; therefore, I feel inadequate in providing reviews to other's poets work here on this site. I do love to read and learn from other wonderful poets such as yourself though.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Beautiful poetry about our Savior, Jesus the Christ. Thank you for helping us remember the true meaning of Easter.
I can certainly see why you were awarded a ribbon of recognition. I am just an amateur poet; therefore, I feel inadequate in providing reviews to other's poets work here on this site. I do love to read and learn from other wonderful poets such as yourself though.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you new friend. I have been writing for five years now, it is a great site to learn and make friends. Keep on writing and don't give up! Blessings, Kay XX
Comment from mermaids
Love the line, Easter brings us to His table, Gifts He gives, life now stable. Your excellent poetic form reminds the reader of the real meaning of Easter and how it is a time of renewal. Your poem rhymes smoothly but I think of the Psalms when reading it, it shows the impact of words on faith.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Love the line, Easter brings us to His table, Gifts He gives, life now stable. Your excellent poetic form reminds the reader of the real meaning of Easter and how it is a time of renewal. Your poem rhymes smoothly but I think of the Psalms when reading it, it shows the impact of words on faith.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Hello my friend, Thanks so much for reading and glad it touched your heart. Have a happy Easter, love Kay XX
Comment from l.raven
HI Kay, this is a wonderful Easter poem...you have told a the wonderful story of Him dying for us...for our sins...so very well written...love your wording...and your picture stunning...Love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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HI Kay, this is a wonderful Easter poem...you have told a the wonderful story of Him dying for us...for our sins...so very well written...love your wording...and your picture stunning...Love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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Luverly Linda, Thanks so much for reading my friend. Love, Kay.
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you are soooooooooooooooo welcome Kay...always you...xxoo luff
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Love ya back, you are my friend that I will never see but one day we will meet and greet. Lots of Love, Kay :-)xx
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and you are mine...smiling...and it will be wonderful to meet you one day...I wish FanStory would have a reunion...but where would it be???sigh xxoo
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You would have to travel 12,000 miles to Oz Kiddo! :-)XX
Comment from Alan K Pease
I haven't practiced my religion (Anglican) for many years, but always favor God for a talk after I retire and prayers for family and friends. Thrice is for the Father, Son, and Holy Ghost. I am sure I would have been lost in the bipolar illness without Him. You bring Jesus to life from Australia and your own heart. Love and Blessings - Alan
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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I haven't practiced my religion (Anglican) for many years, but always favor God for a talk after I retire and prayers for family and friends. Thrice is for the Father, Son, and Holy Ghost. I am sure I would have been lost in the bipolar illness without Him. You bring Jesus to life from Australia and your own heart. Love and Blessings - Alan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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Alan, My church is nature and my cathedral, my garden. I too would not have got through losing my leg without Him. Have a blessed Easter my friend. God bless you both, love, Kay.
Comment from misscookie
Thank you very much for that uplifting poem
Each word touched my heart and soul.
Yes so many take this day for wearing fancy clothes and eating fine food.
For getting what a miracle was performed on this day.
Cookie
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you very much for that uplifting poem
Each word touched my heart and soul.
Yes so many take this day for wearing fancy clothes and eating fine food.
For getting what a miracle was performed on this day.
Cookie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Hello Cookie, Thanks so much for reading, wishing you a Happy Easter. Blessings, Kay.
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You're very welcome.
May you and yours have a blessed and Happy Easter.
Cookie
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May Easter bring you closer to His love for you. Blessings, Kay.
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Amen!
Have a Happy Resurrection day.
Cookie
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U2!
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Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Awesome picture paired with such meaningful words. I love the theme and the way you expressed your beliefs. Excellent job. Good job with the rhyme and flow. No changes needed. This is a great Easter message to all. Thank you.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Awesome picture paired with such meaningful words. I love the theme and the way you expressed your beliefs. Excellent job. Good job with the rhyme and flow. No changes needed. This is a great Easter message to all. Thank you.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review. Happy Easter. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Nosha17
I agree, it has become another commercial holiday where the true meaning has been lost. You have captured the real meaning of Easter well in your poem, with good use of rhyming and good message. Happy Easter to you, Faye
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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I agree, it has become another commercial holiday where the true meaning has been lost. You have captured the real meaning of Easter well in your poem, with good use of rhyming and good message. Happy Easter to you, Faye
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Hello Faye, Thanks so much for reading. Wishing you a Happy Easter. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
I agree, the true meaning of Easter seems to have gotten lost over time. Hopefully, families will continue to teach their children the true meaning of Easter. Excellent work with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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I agree, the true meaning of Easter seems to have gotten lost over time. Hopefully, families will continue to teach their children the true meaning of Easter. Excellent work with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you my friend. I too hope the world will turn back to god and His son. Easter blessings, Kay.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Yes Kay! We all need to remeber His sacrifice and give thanks that He has given us the grace to be forgivin. A very nice poem for Easter. Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Yes Kay! We all need to remeber His sacrifice and give thanks that He has given us the grace to be forgivin. A very nice poem for Easter. Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Hello Nancy, Thanks so much for reading, glad you liked the poem. Blessings for Easter, Kay XX
Comment from Tatarka2
This was such a beautiful poem, and a lovely tribute to our Lord at Easter. This would be a 6, just because I so loved the message, but for me the poem didn't flow as lyrically as some. The rhyming is on-point, but it does seem a bit forced, especially in the line "--not once but thrice." Still, I did love this beautiful tribute, and I commend you for writing and posting it.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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This was such a beautiful poem, and a lovely tribute to our Lord at Easter. This would be a 6, just because I so loved the message, but for me the poem didn't flow as lyrically as some. The rhyming is on-point, but it does seem a bit forced, especially in the line "--not once but thrice." Still, I did love this beautiful tribute, and I commend you for writing and posting it.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much for reading; the message is clear, I write from my heart and don't worry about formal poetry. Happy Easter to you. Cheers, Kay.
