The Gift of Life!' III.
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Comment from mermaids
A gift in disguise is a great use of words that reminds us that God does give us gifts. I like the image of your son as an angel. You have a strong poetic beat in your words, I can hear this poem being read out loud.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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A gift in disguise is a great use of words that reminds us that God does give us gifts. I like the image of your son as an angel. You have a strong poetic beat in your words, I can hear this poem being read out loud.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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That it front of thousands would be nice.
Ricky
Comment from Finglas
Beautiful and heart felt piece. You bring back the total helpless, directionless, despair I lived at my mother's passing. And yes it was God who took my heart in hand and got me through.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Beautiful and heart felt piece. You bring back the total helpless, directionless, despair I lived at my mother's passing. And yes it was God who took my heart in hand and got me through.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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It's funny that you talked about God in your story as the nurse at the scene{she liver there} called me about three hours later [knowing jay would die} and said...
"Jason felt nothing g because God wrapped His arms around Jay and wanted him home!"
"Thanks and sorry about your mom I lost mine the Christmas of 2012.
Ricky1024...
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Ricky1024
I doubt one can ever dry those manly tears when one loses a beloved child. There can be no greater pain, and I note that you, having found faith, must have appreciated how the Father felt as He watched His Son hang on that cross.
Very good poem, I note originally written by your son.
Patrick
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Hi Ricky1024
I doubt one can ever dry those manly tears when one loses a beloved child. There can be no greater pain, and I note that you, having found faith, must have appreciated how the Father felt as He watched His Son hang on that cross.
Very good poem, I note originally written by your son.
Patrick
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I've added that in other poems that Jason would write and I truly believe my writing GIFT {from tragedy} is a Gift from God and Jason!
Thanks for your time Patrick honoring an Angel.
God bless you and yours...
Ricky1024.