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from birth I have longed for death

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Comment from GWinterwin
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I enjoyed your short story about beer, and piss. Was quite a funny little story, but no doubt a lot of truth about how things were back then. Yes you were fortunate to not of had more trouble getting the boys to leave than you did. Especially when they were drinking.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
    Thank you!
Comment from Walu Feral
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Hahahaha! G'day mate, that is another fabulous look inside your very interesting life in those young days. I love the humor in this chapter, well done....SPAG ALERT....

"Gene and (I) ( I (Jene) ) Jene were like two peas in a pod,"

"Thinking back-He (he) teased me a lot, now I realize he was ("being fresh,") "Fresh",

Cheers Fez


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
    I run out of words for Thanks!
Comment from kiwijenny
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I feel exactly the same way about the taste of beer. I don't get the fascination for it....I was always sober at parties ...spent time wiping up vomit....great!... Well penned
Typo...flurting...flirting
God bless

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
    Thank you for the reply and help.