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Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "A Wonderful Surprise!"Fanstory Praises, Woes & Go's.
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Comment from Jay Squires
Sneaky! I thought you were referring to a person who left and came back, and when you said Tom LET him come back, you had me scratching my head.
I'm still scratching my head over what the "note folder" is. Do you mean the little box to the left that stays with the text as you scroll down the screen? I've always had that on mine, at least on the Classic FanStory.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Sneaky! I thought you were referring to a person who left and came back, and when you said Tom LET him come back, you had me scratching my head.
I'm still scratching my head over what the "note folder" is. Do you mean the little box to the left that stays with the text as you scroll down the screen? I've always had that on mine, at least on the Classic FanStory.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Well you must a bin lucky this works better than any we had on custom Fanstory it transfers whatever you put in there down to the reviewing box automatically. No cut and paste needed Just click on Send I think
Comment from artemis53
I never used the note folder but I'm sure that others have and I'm glad that you're content with the arrival of your old friend. I kind of 'wing it!'
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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I never used the note folder but I'm sure that others have and I'm glad that you're content with the arrival of your old friend. I kind of 'wing it!'
Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Well it works better than the old folder on Custom FS try it again you will love it as I do. thanks for coming by.
Comment from ronnie k
My poetic mind was in question as to the message, and I heard "Don.t think a poem listen and feel it" problem solved without the authors but I read it, after rating, my muse sure comes in handy LOL
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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My poetic mind was in question as to the message, and I heard "Don.t think a poem listen and feel it" problem solved without the authors but I read it, after rating, my muse sure comes in handy LOL
Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Thanks Ronnie K only noticed it by accident other day. I know Tom had promised it would be back and a few of us were pestering him about it. i first saw it on the beta of this new format which has taken me a while to get used to.
Comment from judiverse
I haven't noticed this. Will be posting something today or tomorrow, probably, so I will look for it then. Well written, and great AABB rhyme in this. It flows smoothly. Well stated, and you clearly express your delight at having this format. judi
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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I haven't noticed this. Will be posting something today or tomorrow, probably, so I will look for it then. Well written, and great AABB rhyme in this. It flows smoothly. Well stated, and you clearly express your delight at having this format. judi
Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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hey sis still not 100% on this new format but was thrilled when I saw the little notes folder back again other day. someone had asked tom about it recently and he said in a day or two it would be back. Imagine my surprise yesterday ha! Thanks for the review.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nicely written.
-Good rhyme that adds to good flow of ideas.
-Good use of alliteration with "rant" "rave" Emphasizes your idea well.
-I like the repetition of the "t" sound in the last stanza; effective in getting points across for your conclusion.
-I like the last line.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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-Nicely written.
-Good rhyme that adds to good flow of ideas.
-Good use of alliteration with "rant" "rave" Emphasizes your idea well.
-I like the repetition of the "t" sound in the last stanza; effective in getting points across for your conclusion.
-I like the last line.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Thanks new friend for a detailed review. Thanks heaps for coming along. You will love the Notes folder I promise. No cutting and pasting just a send does it down to your reviewing box.
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You are welcome for the review. I am pretty new at Fan Story, so I guess I will figure it out when the notes folder shows up.
Comment from c_lucas
I have not used the latest edition of Tom. It bleeds over into my story's format on occasions. That makes it more of a nuisance than a help aid. I'm glad you like it, Geoff.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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I have not used the latest edition of Tom. It bleeds over into my story's format on occasions. That makes it more of a nuisance than a help aid. I'm glad you like it, Geoff.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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yeah it is great I remembered seeing it on beta version of this new format. Sorry if it messaes you up mate. A lot easier for editing no cutting and pasting like the old editing box on custom format. thanks for coming by.
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You're welcome, Geoff
Comment from royowen
Looks like a nice celebratory poem to me Geoff, s happy that the notes that are part of the new FS site, I personally don't use it, I think I used it once, but it is a good idea, well done, Geoff 1st stanza in mono rhyme, the second 2 in aabb rhyming, nice writing, my friend, well done, blessings, Roy.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Looks like a nice celebratory poem to me Geoff, s happy that the notes that are part of the new FS site, I personally don't use it, I think I used it once, but it is a good idea, well done, Geoff 1st stanza in mono rhyme, the second 2 in aabb rhyming, nice writing, my friend, well done, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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yay mate was that a big six again. I am being encouraged to write more poetry certainly a lot easier if you have the inspiration to do it than stories for sure. Thanks again for coming by, bro!
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Most welcome
Comment from Delahay
Well we should all join in and welcome Tome back along with his Notes Folder. I know I need all the help anyone is willing to offer and appreciate anyone who will offer assistance.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Well we should all join in and welcome Tome back along with his Notes Folder. I know I need all the help anyone is willing to offer and appreciate anyone who will offer assistance.
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Thanks for coming by. I know we were all after Tom for this innovation that showed up in the early days of the new format which many including me did not like at first. Cheers.
