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The Gift of Life!' III.

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A book on living after!

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Comment from meggie13
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This poem is in memory of your son. You loved him so much and still your mourning his leaving you in such a tragic way. I believe that you being a pastor , and a prophet know by now he is in Heaven. above all an Angel. What better a place to be! I think I know your pain because my daughter was murdered while at work. I am resigned because I know where she is now. I hope you are resigned too because only God knows where he would be right now. I pray you do not get offended by my saying this. God giveth and God taketh away. There may be a couple of grammatical issues in your poem but overall is very good. I judge only for the nature of the message and how much it touched me. Very nice picture posted for your write. Blessings always!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
    Sorry about your daughter.
    Tell me alittle about her so i can honor her also.
    "This will be rosted [along with the front page article
    in the Asbury park press in a coulple of days"
    "To honor through an abilty is a gift...
    "But to honor through a gift from God is a miricle...
    "Miricles will and do happen if we believe, have hope, and pray...
    " I am not offended by your thoughts on giveth and taketh away
    as God had more impoprtant plans as Jason saved four lives and
    three are still alive today...
    ricky...
reply by meggie13 on 28-Mar-2015
    Yes, Ricky I believe in miracles. God is doing them every day. I do not want to go in details about my daughter, The case is still under investigation . Tell me when the article about your son is going to be in APP.I agree with you that God had other plans for your Son. He saved other lives. Most of all we are here for a certain time. When our mission is accomplished then we are called home . Blessings! meg
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
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Poetry is God's gift to language, so we can write poems like this and they can last forever.
It is a beautiful poem capturing a beautiful spirit with hazel brown eyes.
A wonderful painting to accompany the poem.
Angels reside in the sky, but also in the heart.
Beautifully written.
Excellent

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
    Thanks Rs.
    "A God given abilty to write is a gift but a God given abiklity to write this way...
    "That he hath given to me is not only a gift...
    "But a miracle...
    Ricky...