Comment from Ashar001

Excellent

Very well written, with some gems, like: "...looked in vain for a simple coffee flavored coffee, a task that is getting more difficult with each passing day. I settled for a Moroccan Hazel-nut latte. I had no clue as to how it would taste, .. "-> hilarious and so true!!
And I loved: "I tried the practice table and found it was no match for me. It was far superior."

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2015

Ashar001
It is so good to see your name again. Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate the rating and the kind words.
I missed you.
Thanks again.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a good chapter. The lack of dialogue was surprising but the story still held it's own which is a credit to your writing. The internal dialogue was strong. A well written chapter.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015

Thank you very much for this awesome review. I had my doubts about this chapter, but you made it all worthwhile.
Marv

Comment from Green_Jello

Excellent

I read through this twice, once for grammatical purposes and once for pleasure. I was unable to find anything wrong and found it easy to follow even though I have not read any previous chapters. You do a great job in your descriptive story telling paying close attention to detail, great work!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015

Thanks for the great review. I was uncertain about this chapter, thinking it was dull, but you've made me feel otherwise.

I would like get your opinion of Chapter 4. It's very different from this one.
Marv