The Gift of Life!' III.
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "In The Blink Of An EYE!"A book on living after!
4 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your words show how loss can impact us. Strong feelings and sadness are seen in your words. You keep your son's memory alive by writing about him, that is the beauty of writing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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Your words show how loss can impact us. Strong feelings and sadness are seen in your words. You keep your son's memory alive by writing about him, that is the beauty of writing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
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So, so, true and so, so, thank you!
Ricky...
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Ricky,
"In the Blink of An Eye" screams raw emotion and sorrow. The first 5 stanzas are superior poetry while the last stanzas giving the reasons for the accident drag. The style of this poem is very unusual and might not be appreciated by every one
My deepest sorrow for your loss.
Preston
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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Hi, Ricky,
"In the Blink of An Eye" screams raw emotion and sorrow. The first 5 stanzas are superior poetry while the last stanzas giving the reasons for the accident drag. The style of this poem is very unusual and might not be appreciated by every one
My deepest sorrow for your loss.
Preston
Comment Written 18-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
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True but although time has vastly passed the salve does nothing for the wound...
ricky.
Comment from CR Delport
I am on leave for two weeks and decided to take a break from writing too. My first break in over two years. I will catch up on your story when I get back. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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I am on leave for two weeks and decided to take a break from writing too. My first break in over two years. I will catch up on your story when I get back. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thanks Christelle.
Probably set it up tomorrow as my daughter has my sachet!
Comment from rspoet
This is an incredibly powerful, tragic, and sad story. It reaches out from the page and grabs your heart and soul. That there should beauty in a story such as this seems like a contradiction, but it is beautifully told.
I'd like to point out a few typing errors to tighten the writing:
Line 1 of the actual poem, I think you want "about a quarter to eight, a dozen years of a single.....
line 20, "so tragic and destined to drive....
Line 25, "ordeal and injure...
Line 27, not sure what you want here , Ford Mustang (toast?)
I've been to the Atco Speedway. I won't ever see it the same way after reading your story.
My heart and beast wishes go out to you.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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This is an incredibly powerful, tragic, and sad story. It reaches out from the page and grabs your heart and soul. That there should beauty in a story such as this seems like a contradiction, but it is beautifully told.
I'd like to point out a few typing errors to tighten the writing:
Line 1 of the actual poem, I think you want "about a quarter to eight, a dozen years of a single.....
line 20, "so tragic and destined to drive....
Line 25, "ordeal and injure...
Line 27, not sure what you want here , Ford Mustang (toast?)
I've been to the Atco Speedway. I won't ever see it the same way after reading your story.
My heart and beast wishes go out to you.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much and I will write this down and add!
Where in Jersey?
Ricky...
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I'm a Jersey boy. Born in North Jersey, but I have lived all over South Jersey: Westmont, Berlin, Voorhees, and Medford.