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Assorted poetry

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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Ya know, Bill, I have always dreamed of living in a house like the one in your accompanying photo here. A home with a lighthouse attached, right on the shoreline. And yes, while erosion of the shore would be of vital concern, it will all still be worth it in my humble opinion. My wife would never go for it, however. So, I guess I'll just have to remain a land-lubber, LOL...

Good stuff, my friend. ~Dean

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
    Thank you, Dean, for giving this a look. Bill
reply by Dean Kuch on 17-Mar-2015
    Sure, thing, Bill. Anytime.
Comment from c_lucas
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This is a very engaging image. Your poem is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a splendid rear. There is very good imagery. Wonderful job.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
    Thank you, Charlie, for the excellent review.
reply by c_lucas on 17-Mar-2015
    You're welcome, Bill. Charlie
Comment from Helena Frances
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Powerful picture. Nature can be harsh, but hard to walk away from, when we weigh the
plentiful days of beauty and peace against the random hours of destruction.

You captured the feelings of many in your well chosen words.

Good job.


 Comment Written 17-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
    Thank you, Helena, for giving this a look.