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Bedtime stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The cats in concert."
Many bedtime stories for children.

20 total reviews 
Comment from Ronni
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Cute an interesting story. Never heard of a cat concert before, so this is a
new twist and novel approach. Fun to read. Thanks for sharing..
Blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.
Comment from misscookie
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I like the artwork you posted to go with your story I thought you story was cute.
The butcher has his point, but the cat were just making a joyful noise.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Treischel
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Like beauty in the eye of the beholders, so arias in the ears of the nearby. A cute story of cats on a summer night. Having heard cats like that, i wasn't too surprised by the butcher's shoe. Good story.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from krys123
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Ine; A very amusing and humorous story which is enjoyable by all children and adults. Well written with superb exhilarating expressive and vividly descriptive imagery that is warming to the heart and fun for the mind. It is well versed and written with a story intended to make one enjoy and happily read intentionally. I particularly enjoyed this story in this relativity to the cats and the reasons why they hang around the Butchers store in the back waiting probably for some treats. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL! Thankfully, my cat goes to bed at the same time as us, and sleeps the night through, until she wakes us up for breakfast about 7:30am, regular as clockwork. I loved this story, Ine, I can see the children laughing at it and wanting more. Lovely! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Mastery
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Hi, Ine. How are you feeling of late? Your essay on the chorusing of cats is unique and humorous. It's not so funny for people who are kept awake sometimes however, is it? Toms on the roam cause a lot of different sounds, eh? Blessings. Fun read. Bob

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. I am OK, thanks for asking, and you?
Comment from Deborah Marie
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Lovely presentation of a well penned chapter in your book paired nicely with comic strip (clever idea). Wonderful progression, rhythm and flow; lite and airy for a bedtime story. Keep 'em coming, Deb

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for the lovely six, I like them so much.
Comment from Joan E.
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What a clever setting for this story--behind the butcher shop. I was surprised that the butcher reacted so violently. I'll be curious to see what happens next and what other neat pictures you find. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Ine,

What a cute story this is. The picture goes really great with it too. I wish I could think of stories to write especially for kids. You did a wonderful job in writing this. I noticed one little mistake in the 3rd paragraph up from the bottom. The 2nd line - Each summer night it id - I'm sure you meant it is.

Kat

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. I'll look.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Excellently done and I can put myself in the shoes (PUN intended) of the baker.
Nice and short for little minds and those of us that love them too.
Very well done, I don't know how many I missed but hope to catch up

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.