Tiny Terrors
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The First Cut is the Deepest"A collection of short horror fiction
68 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
Hi Dean, Do you know I could have sworn I had commented on this before my friend, I certainly read the brilliant story, I remember it well! Great piece of writing.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Hi Dean, Do you know I could have sworn I had commented on this before my friend, I certainly read the brilliant story, I remember it well! Great piece of writing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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It's quite possible, Eric. It's a previously posted story of horror flash fiction which I've chosen to add to my book. So, if you have read it before, I doubly appreciate you reading it yet again, LOL.
Thanks a bunch, my fried. :) ~Dean
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Your work is always worth a second reading my friend.
Comment from Crennan87
Hello again! This flash fiction was raw and ugly, and that is what made it such an exciting read. Your details were intense and gruesome. I love how much of a story you were able tok convey in such few words.
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Hello again! This flash fiction was raw and ugly, and that is what made it such an exciting read. Your details were intense and gruesome. I love how much of a story you were able tok convey in such few words.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2015
Comment from Caroline Yego
You are creatively gifted! It read like a movie. Allow me to say nothing and just enjoy the pleasure of reading such a story.
Excellent.
Yego
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You are creatively gifted! It read like a movie. Allow me to say nothing and just enjoy the pleasure of reading such a story.
Excellent.
Yego
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
Comment from Winslow
Dear Dean,
I guess it just goes to show you should case out your victim better before you act. Maybe Jack the Ripper was manipulating the puppeteer. I wonder If the cop mutilated the body in revenge?
Good luck in the contest.
Winslow
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Dear Dean,
I guess it just goes to show you should case out your victim better before you act. Maybe Jack the Ripper was manipulating the puppeteer. I wonder If the cop mutilated the body in revenge?
Good luck in the contest.
Winslow
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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I don't know if he did or he didn't, Winslow. I know I would have.
Thank you for your review.
Comment from chasennov
The Puppeteer "The First Cut is the Deepest" Wow! You sure know how to pick em, Dean. It's gory, it's nightmarish, but it is also good, and I mean the structure. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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The Puppeteer "The First Cut is the Deepest" Wow! You sure know how to pick em, Dean. It's gory, it's nightmarish, but it is also good, and I mean the structure. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your review, Chase.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from rod007
A very horrific story with a perverted character. There is too much gore for me but the writing style was great and conveyed your message clearly. Well done, Dean.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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A very horrific story with a perverted character. There is too much gore for me but the writing style was great and conveyed your message clearly. Well done, Dean.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your comments, Rod.
~DK
Comment from RGstar
A poignant write indeed, and well delivered.
This one left no strings attached, and why should it.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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A poignant write indeed, and well delivered.
This one left no strings attached, and why should it.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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No strings attached...He says...heh-heh-heh.
Thanks a million, Roy.
Comment from DALLAS01
Sounds like a job for the Bau team from Criminal Minds. This one, though a bit over the top, certainly meets the criteria for horror. A bit repulsive, but then that is the goal, right.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Sounds like a job for the Bau team from Criminal Minds. This one, though a bit over the top, certainly meets the criteria for horror. A bit repulsive, but then that is the goal, right.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Yep. I wanted to shock the pants off people with this story, DALLAS. You're exactly right about that.
Thanks for the review.
Comment from JanetRussek
Hello Dean,
Well, this was very descript! My my, and shockingly graphic. Great writing. And as always, I enjoyed the read. But, you know, I have to read your work while it's still light outside.
Warm Regards,
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Hello Dean,
Well, this was very descript! My my, and shockingly graphic. Great writing. And as always, I enjoyed the read. But, you know, I have to read your work while it's still light outside.
Warm Regards,
Janet
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thanks, Janet. Much obliged.
Comment from Muffins
The first sentence is a dynamite display of an opening. The reader is immediately drawn into a dangerous mind. However, I was shaken out if that state by the second sentence. This is because I noticed that the last word of the first sentence(tight) rhymed with the last word of the second sentence( white). For a minute I wondered if this was going to be a story in a poem. This doesn't take away from the fantastic monstrous main character or the super sonic space of the plot. It is just something that jumped out at me.
I'm excited that you are writing flash fiction.o love to write and read flash fiction. It's the best workout for writers in terms of word choice& tight plotting, so I can't wait to read more from this series.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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The first sentence is a dynamite display of an opening. The reader is immediately drawn into a dangerous mind. However, I was shaken out if that state by the second sentence. This is because I noticed that the last word of the first sentence(tight) rhymed with the last word of the second sentence( white). For a minute I wondered if this was going to be a story in a poem. This doesn't take away from the fantastic monstrous main character or the super sonic space of the plot. It is just something that jumped out at me.
I'm excited that you are writing flash fiction.o love to write and read flash fiction. It's the best workout for writers in terms of word choice& tight plotting, so I can't wait to read more from this series.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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Thanks, Muffins. I can tell you this. I won't be entering ths stories into any more contests.
Much obliged. ;)