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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

If they are really "professional" writers instead of belittling those who may not be perhaps they would be better served to assist them not find critical fault for every tiny blunder they may make.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    Spot on. We are on the same page, mate. Thanks for the rewardless review.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Sometimes people live in a fantasy world because it's safer there. I wrote a poem about my fantasy world. There is nothing wrong in it, however, you cannot live there forever. Eventually, reality does have to set back in.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    Thanks again for your concentrating on all these rants and raves. Hope you read the current one (Chapter 2...have to fix up the chapters I moved around and the index to them! Sigh!)
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Nicely done, Geoff. Well stated, sir!

I loved having good critique and suggestions. But people who go out of their way to criticize and put others down ... no siree!

Good for you!

Have a blessed weekend.

Sonali


 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015
    Thanks Sis remind me to send you my rant I shared with Mikey and his great reply.
Comment from JudyS
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Sankey, I certainly enjoyed this one. I know exactly who your're talking about and I couldn't agree more. I hope I give good reviews, I sure try to. Well done on this one. Judy

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
    Hi stranger where ya bin? Thanks for coing by. I was inspired to write this because of a review my wife got for her Trip Stories. have you been over there yet? We opened a special account Tootsie55 so she could write all our trip stuff I only write chapters 1 and 3 I would suggest goin g back to the start so you understand more of where we are coming from I just proofread and put them up except as I said for chapter 1 and 3. Thanks again have not seen you in a long while.
reply by JudyS on 03-Mar-2015
    Hey, I've been busy. I got a wild hair and ripped the kitchen counter top tiles off and replaced them. Now the back splash looks crappy so I'm getting going on that and then of course, the cabinets look bad so I'll stain those. I'll certainly check out your wife's trip stuff. It sounds like fun reads. Have a good one and if I'm not here, you know what I'm doing. LOL. Judy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
    Loved the wild hair thing never heard that one before hehe!
Comment from ravenblack
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I really like that you chose to capitalize Fantasy suggestion Fanstory, rank and all that goes with it really fantasy land. There is nothing wrong with constructive criticism, but egotistical bullying - no thanks.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
    thanks new friend actually I think we have met your name looks familiar. Appreciate your review anyway. My wife is writing about our trips in Australia if interested this was where the poem came from. Check Tootsie55 if you wish suggest starting at the beginning. I wrote Chapters 1 and 3 the rest is hers good to read from start to understand our disposition as disabled folks. I do proofreading and putting up of her stories as I said except Chapters 1 and 3 I wrote. Cheers.
Comment from Autumn Splendour
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The poem makes a comment on both writers and reviewers. There are arrogant writers who cannot take criticism and there are reviewers who are picky and discriminating. So the losers are the amateurs who are denied good constructive comments. How true.

I once gave 4 stars to a writer who took it so badly, his response became more like a personal attack! LOL. So we have encouraging reviewers and we have "up in the cloud" ones but we also have self-righteous writers who cannot take criticisms and reviews below 5 stars.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
    Hi new friend. I have had the below five reviews but they get swamped by the fives so I don't let them worry me. I have had below fives that after I do some correcting they come back and up the points! yay! I appreciate the great bunch of reviewers I have on FS. Some initially hurt but then when I go back and look I see they are right in their suggestions and fix stuff. This poem happened because of a review of my wife's stuff she is doing on FS. I encouraged her to come on FS to write about our trips in our country of Australia. I only wrote 2 of her chapters myself Ch 1 and 3 if you are interested in checking her stories I suggest starting at the beginning to learn about our dispositions look for Our Trips on Tootsie55. I do all the proof reading and putting up on her own account. Thanks for your great review.
Comment from Glasstruth
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Writing just for the fun of it is all right. Then there's those who want perfection which is okay too. It all depends what you want. Your poem reads well and is very thought provoking. Les

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
    Hi Les good hearing from you. As a lot of the reviewers have stated on here a lot of us write for fun. I am getting near the end of my autobiography that I am pretty sure you have looked at. This poem came out of a review of my wife's Trip stories she is doing on Tootsie55 I r=encouraged her to come on FS and write about our trips as she did not want me to "steal her thunder" and mention too much about our trips in my Autobiography "The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go" so she is doing that. I have encouraged folks if interested in reading about our trips on her account to start at the beginning I wrote chapters 1 and 3 only I just proofread and put up all her stuff. Look for Our Trips on her account. Thanks again for coming by.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Goeff. I hear ya mate. There seems to be a crowd of wankers on here at the moment. For example, I got a 2 star review on one of mine last week that you gave me a 6 star on and so did 14 other people give me six. When I checked the profile it was a "standard member" (non paying). Then we have these know alls as you say. Bugger them all Sir I say LOL. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
    Mate when you get a 2 to 4 amongst a hoarde of 5's and 6's I say don't let it worry you. The low points won't count. Thanks for the review good buddy.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem very much. I agree with what you wrote. You pointed out several instances where FS members could improve. Good job. I see no changes. Some on FS do believe they are right no matter what. Thanks for sharing and making some valid points.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
    Thanks jannypan can't remember if I checked your stuff out yety I know you have dome some reviews before. Maybe should be fans ha I will check on that.
Comment from judiverse
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Excellent rhyme in this. I think most of the FS members are pretty nice, but some just expect to be crowned when they enter a contest or rise in the rankings. A few reviewers are wonderful and take the extra step to give helpful suggestions. I follow some novels, but if it's science fiction or fantasy, I usually stay away. It's hard to say why readers choose what they do, but I have observed that when they have to story of the month selection, most are fiction rather than non-fiction. Just keep at it. judi

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Sis lovely hearing from you. Glad to have met you on FS a true friend. God Bless.
reply by judiverse on 03-Mar-2015
    You're very welcome. Keep up the poetry writing! judi