A Book of ... Free Verse (Vol.1)
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "I ... is ego !"Metre ... Freeverse
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Chloe, you are on a roll sweet girl...it says in the bible God wants us to be humble...he would take the poor man over the rich...He doesn't want us to try to walk over...or on top of others...very well written my sweet friend...love your poem you...and your picture...perfect...love you girl...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Hi Chloe, you are on a roll sweet girl...it says in the bible God wants us to be humble...he would take the poor man over the rich...He doesn't want us to try to walk over...or on top of others...very well written my sweet friend...love your poem you...and your picture...perfect...love you girl...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Thanks Linda, its Chloe here ... I just got one heaven of a poem from God about myself and I just had to share it. One guy got pissed ... on another one so's I laid down the law ... I bit him ... aint heard from him since and didn't even have to mute him. I'll be in touch Linda keep those sweet thoughts coming ... We'll be famous and rich after all this. Much obliged. I thought it was good and it has some quality lines that nearly cracked my cranium getting them out. Thankfully my grey mass is not quite liquid yet so it wont easily be sucked through my nose like the Egyptians used to do when they wanted to mummify people.
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LOL...Hey You...your always soooo very welcome...love ya..xxoo
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... have you seen what I've gone and done ... I got a William Missouri and a Big Iron ready in case anyone needs it, you'll find them at the top of my profile page. lol.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, this is certainly a different take on the ego. People often say how we need to put our egos aside in order to fully love and understand others. If I'm understanding this, you seem to be celebrating the ego in all its glories and frailties.
In my metaphysical readings, I've learned how our egos can get in the way of our spiritual development. True enough, but while on this planet and living in these human bodies, we do have to rely on the ego for self-esteem and accomplishments. Regards, Lou
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Well, this is certainly a different take on the ego. People often say how we need to put our egos aside in order to fully love and understand others. If I'm understanding this, you seem to be celebrating the ego in all its glories and frailties.
In my metaphysical readings, I've learned how our egos can get in the way of our spiritual development. True enough, but while on this planet and living in these human bodies, we do have to rely on the ego for self-esteem and accomplishments. Regards, Lou
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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I think it is the description of how I see the ego turning some people into the creatures that they are. The ego can feed off many things to destroy the more peaceful and charitable nature of the human condition. Here, I think, I try to capture how when the human spirit is released to be under command entirely guided by the ego it who be. We all need self esteem and accomplishment but the question is can we do it without pride and self gratification which leads to baser emotions.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Bic. An interesting post. I think most people suffer from an inferiority complex disguised as ego. After all, if we don't toot our own horn every now and then, no one else will. Our accomplishments are gifts used. It's good to be proud of them without being apologetic or obnoxious about it. Personally, I never liked working in any kind of team--so count 'I' out. Most team participants sit back and let the other guy do the work. I think that's why FanStory works so well. We all post our own work without dependence on anyone else. It either flies or sinks like a rock. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hi Bic. An interesting post. I think most people suffer from an inferiority complex disguised as ego. After all, if we don't toot our own horn every now and then, no one else will. Our accomplishments are gifts used. It's good to be proud of them without being apologetic or obnoxious about it. Personally, I never liked working in any kind of team--so count 'I' out. Most team participants sit back and let the other guy do the work. I think that's why FanStory works so well. We all post our own work without dependence on anyone else. It either flies or sinks like a rock. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Excellent ... much appreciated, well I hope this doesn't sink or I'll be swimming all the way home.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, Bicpen.
The sentiments expressed in your poem are genuine and well expressed.
No BS here, you've written what you wanted to say concerning ego and meant it.
To grow we must put our ego on the back burner and dig a little deeper for the truth as to who we are as individuals.
As far as there being an "I" in team, the common misconception is that there isn't one.
Oh, but there is...
It's hidden in the "A"-Hole.
Well penned, sir.
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Hey, Bicpen.
The sentiments expressed in your poem are genuine and well expressed.
No BS here, you've written what you wanted to say concerning ego and meant it.
To grow we must put our ego on the back burner and dig a little deeper for the truth as to who we are as individuals.
As far as there being an "I" in team, the common misconception is that there isn't one.
Oh, but there is...
It's hidden in the "A"-Hole.
Well penned, sir.
~Dean
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Excellent ... well done sir ... there's practically an i referring to ego in everything. We really have to take a step back when we're in our self discovery to see what we're really made of. As for you Dean your made of some funny stuff and I like that ... lol ! Just remember as far as the star gimmick goes,
... if it's lame
it gets the blame ...
... like we do when our parents tell us off.
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You're very welcome, Bicpen.
The pleasure was all mine.
Take care,
~Dean
Comment from AdaJulie
Well hello, I believe this the first I have read of yours. It is deep and mind moving. I like that, Probably too deep for my shallow mind but something to aspire to for when I grow up. Very nice work.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Well hello, I believe this the first I have read of yours. It is deep and mind moving. I like that, Probably too deep for my shallow mind but something to aspire to for when I grow up. Very nice work.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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... well I still haven't grown up ... I have not been around for a while but I'm hoping to rekindle my old flame so hopefully I'll be around for a while, watch this space ...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much self indulgence going on here in your poem where only yourself matters, when we live alone we become self centred, isolated and protective of our own solitude, I know those feelings. It is good to be self sufficient and to enjoy ones own company though, the world is often an unwanted intrusion, this is an interesting point of view, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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There is much self indulgence going on here in your poem where only yourself matters, when we live alone we become self centred, isolated and protective of our own solitude, I know those feelings. It is good to be self sufficient and to enjoy ones own company though, the world is often an unwanted intrusion, this is an interesting point of view, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thanks Dolly ... remember there aint no I in team but there is a me ...
Comment from Brett Matthew West
A big ego can definitely make the person who has it be perceived in a poor light. Humility is such a better way to go. No need to hide behind a mask. Be yourself. Well written poem depicting this theme nicely.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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A big ego can definitely make the person who has it be perceived in a poor light. Humility is such a better way to go. No need to hide behind a mask. Be yourself. Well written poem depicting this theme nicely.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Thank you ... much appreciated.
Comment from JanPerry
Nice accompanying picture. I ego, could say you are in love with yourself and your own body. To share yourself with another is hard work. The fear of rejection is greater than you realise and if you start talking to strangers, you will soon find it out.
Im a loner as well. I enjoy all activities that do not require other people. Fortunately, there are many of these and I enjoy solitary activities to the full.
A bit like you. Nice poem, perhaps a bit too much about I ego, keep it shorter.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Nice accompanying picture. I ego, could say you are in love with yourself and your own body. To share yourself with another is hard work. The fear of rejection is greater than you realise and if you start talking to strangers, you will soon find it out.
Im a loner as well. I enjoy all activities that do not require other people. Fortunately, there are many of these and I enjoy solitary activities to the full.
A bit like you. Nice poem, perhaps a bit too much about I ego, keep it shorter.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Cool ... Like the ego I wanted to indulge, hence the length. I like my own company and try not to get to involved with anything to much as my mind keeps reminding me. I wanted to experiment and find out what people thought about the write whether they agreed or disagreed. Its more about the intensity of self indulging where no one is a friend but the passion and lust of self satisfying.
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
I liked the idea of this poem a lot.
The image of the all consuming ego, although I am not sure I agree with all aspects (!).
This was ambitious and you pulled it off.
Nicely done
GMG
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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hi there,
I liked the idea of this poem a lot.
The image of the all consuming ego, although I am not sure I agree with all aspects (!).
This was ambitious and you pulled it off.
Nicely done
GMG
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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The ego does many things ... I suppose the one thing that my poem tries to convey is that they are all for its egotistical self gratification. The aspects of the ego are all according to the direction in which the ego wishes to fulfill its self in an all consuming self satisfaction. The idea was that the ego is base in its want and desire with a grotesque attitude to fulfill the lasciviousness.... animal instincts ... using the descriptions of need to be entertained and filled beyond useful recognition or purpose ... this is portrayed in a dark mentality.
Comment from Dawny53
Never before have I known of a poet to attempt writing about the ego.. talk about a walk through humility or honesty.. very well done and thought provoking.. and humbling in places where it needed to be.. glad I stopped to read!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
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Never before have I known of a poet to attempt writing about the ego.. talk about a walk through humility or honesty.. very well done and thought provoking.. and humbling in places where it needed to be.. glad I stopped to read!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2015
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Cool ... I thought it would be worth while to suggest the reality of the ego in its pure unadulterated consumption ... I suppose if I had spent more time on it maybe it could be a bit more brutal but that may make it a bit longer ... much obliged glad you can read and have a think about it after all poetry is made to evoke the reaction of the thoughts and emotions ... thanks much BP.
