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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "HORRIBLE HARRY and the BULL-FROG!"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.

3 total reviews 
Comment from mermaids
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Interesting tale from another place and time. Bull frogs, dinosaurs and Horrible Harry. I can see this poem with illustrations in a book. The story flows smoothly and your descriptions are vivid.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
    Thank you mermaid!
    "Now wouldn't it be nice to experience that time-period for just a day?"
    Ricky..
    Te, hee, hee!!
Comment from CR Delport
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Sometimes I wonder what the earth would have been like if a rock from space didn't wipe out the dinosaurs. But then I look at the politicians and I think they weren't wiped out. They had just evolved.
Good job, Ricky.
Have a most excellent day.
Christelle.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Thanks for that C and very funny!
    {That rhymes I wonder why?}
    Duh!!!
    Ricky..
Comment from daycee1
Exceptional
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Ha! That was a really funny story! I loved it! It had enough dialogue, description and more! Thanks for the story,it was good!
Daycee1

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
    Thanks so, so, much daycee!!
    Will you marry me?
    Ricky!!!
    LOL!!!
reply by daycee1 on 14-Feb-2015
    Yes, I do, just kidding! LOL!