Windows To The Past
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Louie"Poems about the old West.
53 total reviews
Comment from Loren .
I loved reading this. But then, I've always loved to read your poetry. It is a true gift. I've missed reading your posts, but then I have been abstencia for a while. Someday I will try, in the far distant future, to emulate you, you set a high bar and I know I will not come close, but the effort to try something new will be a good challenge. Good to see you - take care and God bless, Loren
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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I loved reading this. But then, I've always loved to read your poetry. It is a true gift. I've missed reading your posts, but then I have been abstencia for a while. Someday I will try, in the far distant future, to emulate you, you set a high bar and I know I will not come close, but the effort to try something new will be a good challenge. Good to see you - take care and God bless, Loren
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2023
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Loren, Thank you so much for the kind words and stars.
So many of our old friends are gone and I am always so
happy to one them return. Especially one as talented as you. I appreciate your praise. Have a lovely week. Nancy:)
Comment from BethShelby
Nancy, you are a wonderful poem. I'm missing out on so much by FanStory not notifiying me when you post. I see this is from a book you wrote a while back. I going to need to look reqularly to see what you might have reposted recently. I love this poem about the old timer, Louie.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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Nancy, you are a wonderful poem. I'm missing out on so much by FanStory not notifiying me when you post. I see this is from a book you wrote a while back. I going to need to look reqularly to see what you might have reposted recently. I love this poem about the old timer, Louie.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023
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I wonder how many of my other fans are not being notified? Maybe that is why I am thinking about leaving in December from lack of interest. It's just not the site I signed up for. Thank you my friend. Yes I have posted a few lately. Have a lovely week, Dear. Nancy:)
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I've asked FanStory why they don't notify me about you and they give me the answer that everyone is notified unless they in a blind contest but that not true. I've never been notified.
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I know. Generic answers is all we ever get.LOL
Comment from JSD
Well managed rhyme and rhythm, effortless and unforced. Not sure what the apostrophe is doing at the end of 'repartee', but otherwise this is an enjoyable tale of the town drunk and most enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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Well managed rhyme and rhythm, effortless and unforced. Not sure what the apostrophe is doing at the end of 'repartee', but otherwise this is an enjoyable tale of the town drunk and most enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2023
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I have no idea why it is there either. Maybe spell check? Maybe my busy fingers? Haha You are the only one who questioned it but then this site is not about helping that much anymore. We used to have a few teachers who tried to teach. Thanks for the comment and stars. Have a nice day! Nancy:)
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Aww. Thanks. To be honest I wondered if it was pretending to be an accent as the word is French. X
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That's what I thought...so I let it be. LOL
I know how we should pronounce it. It does rhyme. Thanks again. Nancy:)
Comment from Carol Clark2
A good story told in perfect rhyme and meter. You painted quite a picture for the reader, one right out of "Gunsmoke." Too bad the gentle soul couldn't regain control, even with the help of others. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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A good story told in perfect rhyme and meter. You painted quite a picture for the reader, one right out of "Gunsmoke." Too bad the gentle soul couldn't regain control, even with the help of others. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the lovely exceptional rating Carol. I really appreciate that and the kind words. Have a great day. Nancy:)xxx
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Your poem was very well written.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent Couplets in Heptameter poem about the town's drunk. It's very sad. Alcohol kills and the 1800s they didn't have AA. I can imagine how hard it was, poor man.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Excellent Couplets in Heptameter poem about the town's drunk. It's very sad. Alcohol kills and the 1800s they didn't have AA. I can imagine how hard it was, poor man.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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It is sad. Thank you for the lovely review and stars Gypsy.
Nancy:) xxx
Comment from Wendy G
Very well written poem, but quite sad. Addiction has taken its toll yet he retains some shreds of dignity despite everything. At least some people show compassion. Many of these town drunks are just gentle, sad lost souls who can't cope with life.
Webdy
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Very well written poem, but quite sad. Addiction has taken its toll yet he retains some shreds of dignity despite everything. At least some people show compassion. Many of these town drunks are just gentle, sad lost souls who can't cope with life.
Webdy
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the review and stars Wendy. Yes, I agree with you.xxx Nancy:)
Comment from country ranch writer
Gunsmolies town drunk, Louie is so familiar to me. He's such a harmles ole soul he wouldn't hurt a fly. The Marshall Dillion watches out for him, and doctor being his friend tries to do right by him trying to keep him healthy. Chester and Newly watch over him too. Poor man wouldn't know what to do without friends like them. He is a friend of miss Kitties she sometimes give him a sip,or to to calm hidpsvshakes.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Gunsmolies town drunk, Louie is so familiar to me. He's such a harmles ole soul he wouldn't hurt a fly. The Marshall Dillion watches out for him, and doctor being his friend tries to do right by him trying to keep him healthy. Chester and Newly watch over him too. Poor man wouldn't know what to do without friends like them. He is a friend of miss Kitties she sometimes give him a sip,or to to calm hidpsvshakes.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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That's right! He is such a great character on the series. I do enjoy Gunsmoke. We know there are a great many episodes to watch after all those years. Thanks for the review and stars, Barb.xxx Nancy:)
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Comment from w.j.debi
You do a great job describing the life of the town drunk. Some people think he is a pest. Some people want to help him out if he will let them. But will he help himself?
Excellent storytelling that put us in the Old West with one of its occupants.
You have excellent meter and rhyme, but the storytelling makes the reader just get into the story.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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You do a great job describing the life of the town drunk. Some people think he is a pest. Some people want to help him out if he will let them. But will he help himself?
Excellent storytelling that put us in the Old West with one of its occupants.
You have excellent meter and rhyme, but the storytelling makes the reader just get into the story.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thanks for the lovely comments and stars debi. xxxx Nancy:)
Comment from jim vecchio
I enjoyed tremendously your poem, your words, and your word flow. Plus, I happen to like all things western. Then you topped yourself by smoothly incorporating in your work a wise warning gsinst addiction.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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I enjoyed tremendously your poem, your words, and your word flow. Plus, I happen to like all things western. Then you topped yourself by smoothly incorporating in your work a wise warning gsinst addiction.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the review and stars, Jim. Nancy:)
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Please continue to write!
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Thank you, I want to but the well has been dry for some time now. Thank you for the boost to my ego. That should help. LOL Nancy:)
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Anytime you want to write, I'll try to be there to read it!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is such a sad, but well written story in a poem, using the heptameter form which gives it a smooth rhyme and rhythm, as is not unusual coming from you, my dear Nancy. This sad man, addicted to drink, and lives in the Sheriffs jail. That is so sad, and how nice the sheriff was. This is a lovely poem, my friend, I really enjoyed it. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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This is such a sad, but well written story in a poem, using the heptameter form which gives it a smooth rhyme and rhythm, as is not unusual coming from you, my dear Nancy. This sad man, addicted to drink, and lives in the Sheriffs jail. That is so sad, and how nice the sheriff was. This is a lovely poem, my friend, I really enjoyed it. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you for the uplifting review and stars, Sandra. So glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, Nancy:)
