Holding Hands
3-5-3 nature13 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
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Hahahaha! G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
Comment from Dawny53
Wow, what a creative and original entry! Excellent image choice, and some really eat and informative authors notes.. good luck to you!
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Wow, what a creative and original entry! Excellent image choice, and some really eat and informative authors notes.. good luck to you!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, this is really gruesome, but then, as someone who loves to snorkel and scuba-dive, is it surprising I would think so? (Do I nag? ....gulp...sure hope not...LOL) What a witty and very amusing little poem Excellent presentation too - I enjoyed it very much. Good luck!
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Wow, this is really gruesome, but then, as someone who loves to snorkel and scuba-dive, is it surprising I would think so? (Do I nag? ....gulp...sure hope not...LOL) What a witty and very amusing little poem Excellent presentation too - I enjoyed it very much. Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
This is taking the form to the absolute limit!!! Ha! A complete tale of murderous angst in a few well chosen words. Great presentation.
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This is taking the form to the absolute limit!!! Ha! A complete tale of murderous angst in a few well chosen words. Great presentation.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from Charlene0513
You have captures the perilous ways that someone
can succumb to death when a lethal organism is
let out of its confines.
Charlene
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You have captures the perilous ways that someone
can succumb to death when a lethal organism is
let out of its confines.
Charlene
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from skye
lionfish
stings nagging wife's hand-
perfect crime
So why is it always the wife who nags and needs to be gone? I think men are bigger nags, especially about food and tv. LOL
Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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lionfish
stings nagging wife's hand-
perfect crime
So why is it always the wife who nags and needs to be gone? I think men are bigger nags, especially about food and tv. LOL
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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You are absolutely correct!!! Ha! I have my hand in the tank right now ... in shame! Thank you. Good point.
Comment from emrpoems
lionfish
stings nagging wife's hand-
perfect crime
very interesting topic
Stunning presentation
Makes complete sense and satisfies the requirements of the prompt
perfect syllable count
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lionfish
stings nagging wife's hand-
perfect crime
very interesting topic
Stunning presentation
Makes complete sense and satisfies the requirements of the prompt
perfect syllable count
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count - seems to always be the biggest hurdle LOL. You deliver a flamboyant piece with a story line and solid finish. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count - seems to always be the biggest hurdle LOL. You deliver a flamboyant piece with a story line and solid finish. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from dmt1967
Wow, now that's an idea for my next murder novel lol, killed by fish. I like your poem and wonder how many me with nagging wife will like it too lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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Wow, now that's an idea for my next murder novel lol, killed by fish. I like your poem and wonder how many me with nagging wife will like it too lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
Comment from adewpearl
effective presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count for the contest
laugh-inducing gallows humor through personification
Brooke
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effective presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count for the contest
laugh-inducing gallows humor through personification
Brooke
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
