Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Anon. I find it really hard to write a review on such a little piece, but from time to time one just leaps off the page and says so much, as this one does. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015

Thanks Fez for the great review and wonderful comments. I appreciate it Mary

Comment from skye

Excellent

sky above
keeps the sun and moon
safe for us

When I look at the sky I am grateful for a loving creator who planned our world and made it work so well.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Oh this is such a sweet little 3-5-3 poem and entry for the prompt. I love that the sky is the safe keeper of the moon and stars. Good luck:)
teresa

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

Really great image choice for this piece.. it caught my attention and I just had to take a further look.. it's a fine entry, syllable count is perfect, and very original. Good luck to you!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks for the excellent review.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count - seems to always be the biggest hurdle LOL. You deliver a lovely common sense kind of piece with no frills, just skill. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

thanks Monica for the excellent review

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

lovely pairing of artwork and poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count for the contest
good alliterative grouping of sky/sun/safe
a thoughtful observation
Brooke

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks Brooke, I appreciate your encouraging review.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a pretty 3-5-3 nature poem. The form and syllable count are correct according to the rules of the contest, and the presentation is lovely. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks Jeanie for the encouraging review.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Nice whimsy post, mystery writer.

Top 's' alliteration throughout.

Excellent imagery.

Smooth flow through all three lines.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks Ray for the excellent review and great comments.

Comment from pasinger

Excellent

Criteria met.
We need the sun by day and the moon by night.
How often do we consider these wonders of nature.
A good entry for the competition.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015

Thanks for the great review. I appreciate it.