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Nature's Show

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Comment from LeslieP5
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I like nature's show 3-5-3 beautifully viewed cinema. The idea of comparing nature to a beautifully viewed cinema resonates with me. Too often with our busy lives, we fail to look at the beauty that surrounds us. Thinking of it as a beautifully viewed cinema, hopefully will make us slow down and take notice. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2015


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
    oh Leslie, you are so sweet girl...thank you so much for going back and reading me...I used to write more...and I think better...will be back soon I hope...LOL...soooooo love ya girl...thank you for a wonderful review...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by LeslieP5 on 14-Aug-2015
    Thank you Linda, Soooo appreciate the welcome you gave me here. I look forward o reading more of the poems and new ones when you decide to post XOXO
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
    you are so welcome Leslie...thank you!!! Luff xxoo Linda
Comment from trimple
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Hey, Two socks

OH! Arn't you the clever one...

You spend weeks without a poem, then BANG! out they pop!

Teeny tiny nuggets that pack such a punch.

You say it all here in this wonderful poem about just how incredible nature is.


Love it!!!

twilight:)

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
    HI Twilight, you so make me smile...I am so glad you like it...thank you for going back and reading...you are soooooooooo sweet you...I need to get more out there...you know they take time...LOL...thank you...I love ya...Linda xxoo...
Comment from closetpoetjester
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VERY clever Linda, and what a cinematic experience for all. Just loved this clever short poem. Beautiful and eloquent and hard to go past. Seriously though, with these short forms it's hard to pack a profound experience into so few syllable but you've done it divinely darling. A well deserved sixer mate. Enjoy!!!
Hugs and much love
Phillippa
xoxo

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
    OMG Phillippa, thank you so much for going back and reading my poem...and for all your wonderful stars...you are so a great friend...I am so glad you like it sweet lady...I came in tied for second...smiling...so love ya you...God Bless...xxoo
reply by closetpoetjester on 26-Feb-2015
    It was gorgeous, beautiful and clever...MUCH like YOU

    I just HAD to sixer it.
    Believe me, I don't dole out sixers much on short forms.

    They gots to be SUPER good.
    You cut it real good mate.

    xoxoxo

    PS Second? WTF?
    I demand a recount LOL
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
    LOL...happy with second...been in 5 contest...won 3...second 2...so glad you like it...smiling big...xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
    LOL...happy with second...been in 5 contest...won 3...second 2...so glad you like it...smiling big...xxoo
reply by closetpoetjester on 26-Feb-2015
    Oh you GOTS to be happy with that.
    I don't even hardly enter them any more so racking up a win is like scooping the pool on rocking horse dung!
    LOL
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
    or beetle...LOL...that is why I don't get into to many...I have seen what can happen...I have to feel it before I get in... LOL...
Comment from lakeport
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Nature's show, indeed so colorful, that's a lovely expressed 3/5/3 poem. Good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs! Lakeport.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2015
    HI Erich, thank you so very much for going back and reading my poem...I am so very glad you like it...it's beautiful...and free to view...thank you...you...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by lakeport on 16-Feb-2015
    you are very welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
    smiling...xxoo
reply by lakeport on 18-Feb-2015
    you are very welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2015
    and your so welcome too!!! sweet dreams sweetie
reply by lakeport on 19-Feb-2015
    thank you very much, Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
    so many welcome to ya...luff xxoo
reply by lakeport on 20-Feb-2015
    you are very welcome.Hugs! Lakeport.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2015
    you so make me smile!!! xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
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There cannot be a more beautiful cinema than one created by Mother Nature. You captured that thought so succinctly in this 3-5-3 and reinforced it with a parallel artwork. Now, I can count birds and bees in the Land of Nod... Best wishes in the contest as well as lovely dreams- Joan

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    Hi ya bright eyes, if anyone should know about the beauty of nature...it would be you...you have seen soooooooo much of it...jealous me...thank you so much Joan...came in second with a few others...smiling...I hope you had a wonderful time in the Land of Nod....is there anywhere you haven't been???LOL...love ya you...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by Joan E. on 13-Feb-2015
    Portugal--Iceland--Norway...still on my list! Thank you for your compliment.

    Second in a contest is good--it bodes well for taking first next time. Big hugs and happy Valentine's Day weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    you too Joan...Happy Valentines weekend to you...would so love to go with ya...sigh...luff xxoo
Comment from kriver
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Hi,
The statement the poem make about
nature being a show is sure true.
I think the piece is well written.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    HI Kriver, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad that you like it...I came in second with a few others...smiling...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Oatmeal
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L.RAVEN,

You did a wonderful job with the challenge that you chose. The theme was good. Your thoughts are well described. Your arrangement here is very creative.
The artwork complemented your poem.

There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    HI Camille, thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love you back...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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My dream is to get a house with a hammock and a couple of bird feeders. Then I can lay outside and watch the birds all day...Housework? What is this housework you speak of? LOL. Great job

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
    HI Meghan, sounds like a plan...no house work here...LOL...thank you very much...now get some rest...goodnight...sweet dreams...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from rstonerjr
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very enjoyable write, works well with the offered image. Nature certainly can be a cinema of action and color.congratulations on a fine write.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    Hi rstoneerjr, thank you so much for a great review...yes nature is a beautiful cinema of beauty...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem. There is beauty in nature everywhere. Your poem expresses that well. I see nothing to change. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
    HI Janny, thank you so very much...I came in second with a few others...smiling...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo