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Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Donny the Dragonfly"
A delightful Childen Lesson Book.
2 total reviews
Comment from
fimarie78
aw. I was eager to read the rest of this. The writing had a lively pace and the language was engaging and appropriate for young readers. keep up the good work.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
Give me ten.
Was on a dating site!
ricky...
Comment from
LeannaP
Ricky,
A very interesting read.
Somehow , I was sucked into a world
of Dragonflies and insects alike. But that's GREAT writing.
You illustrated such a lovely picture and
you used great anecdotes and
anomalies to paint this
picture.
I really enjoyed your use of sarcasm as well.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 07-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
Give me ten and it will be completed.
Ricky...
reply by LeannaP on 07-Feb-2015
Awesome!
Much success to you
LeannP
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