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Nature's Poetic Voice.

Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Cycle of Seasons."
A sensory appreciation of nature.

8 total reviews 
Comment from Treischel
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Not only were the words that poetically describe the changing seasons beautiful, but the entire composition was lovely. Well rhymed and worded, this is quite an artistic gem.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2015
    Thank you so much.
    Your positive analysis and lovely six stars is so appreciated.
    Sometimes I wonder why I do this but your review has made my heart sing.
    Thank you.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from Sam Mendonca
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Excellent poem describing the change of the seasons.

You did an excellent piece of writing, giving the reader the image of each season.

I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    Thank you.
    As always I truly appreciate your time and review.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Shirley, this is just beautiful...you can almost feel the breeze of the leaves and the trees...great rhythm and rhyme...and I love your picture and the colors...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
    Thank you Linda.
    I appreciate your review.
    I love the brilliant pic from Cleo85.
    "-) Shirley
reply by l.raven on 07-Feb-2015
    so welcome you...xxooo
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a very interesting post that the author has created here. At first I thought that this poem was going T herald spring in, but then it went on to summer and the whole year. This is great. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thanks Tomes,
    Your support is appreciated.
    When I started to write the poem I had spring in mind.
    As you can see my muse lead me down a slightly different path.
    I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
    :-) Shirley
reply by Tomes Johnston on 06-Feb-2015
    I did indeed
Comment from mbagby23
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Season forever changing cycle. I love spring the best. The earth reawakening. Such a beautiful sight. Next is summer, however that can get to hot. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you for reviewing.
    I appreciate your generous review stars and comments.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Shirley,

I keep forgetting, while we have our winter, you're having summer. Of course, living here in the desert, we don't really notice winter all that much. Outside of a few rainy days, we're able to open the arcadia door and windows by noon. So, not a hard winter at all.

I like you poem, with all it's imagery and feeling of the season. Nicely done.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Hi Jax.
    Thanks for reviewing.
    Yep! We're all in reverse.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from CR Delport
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Yes, it is wonderful, but I am still very glad it is summer here. I don't like winter, although our winters are mostly filled with sunshine and blue skies. Well done.
Take care.
Christelle.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you Christelle.
    I appreciate your thoughtful review.
    I don't really like extreme hot or cold but have learnt to live with whatever comes. Lol.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Shirley. This is a very well written and presented piece mate. It flows nicely and is ceratianly a breath of fresh air after the winter. I'm from the tropics so I only know 2 seasons, wet or dry. Cheers fez

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
    Thank you. I appreciate your review.
    The one certainty about the seasons is that they will constantly change with nature's cycles.
    "-) Shirley