Words Only! No Fish(ing) Allowed!!
They're just words, Mikey. Just words.18 total reviews
Comment from Michael Wahl
JP ilcher, I realize that you
wrote and submitted this some time back, but I was re-reading some of my reviews just now, to see if I could get some helpful hints
for my poetry writing, and I came across your review of my poem "Somebody" from the same era,
and since I
never had replied to your excellent comments back then, I thought that it was time to let you know that I really do appreciate the 6stars6stars6stars
then to read one of yours, and to find
a 6star lurking there underwater with all the fishes amazing. thanks. for all. for everything.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
JP ilcher, I realize that you
wrote and submitted this some time back, but I was re-reading some of my reviews just now, to see if I could get some helpful hints
for my poetry writing, and I came across your review of my poem "Somebody" from the same era,
and since I
never had replied to your excellent comments back then, I thought that it was time to let you know that I really do appreciate the 6stars6stars6stars
then to read one of yours, and to find
a 6star lurking there underwater with all the fishes amazing. thanks. for all. for everything.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2015
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Aweeee.. Thank you!! You're too sweet - seriously. Lol!! ;) Thanks for reviewing (again!)!! Much appreciated!!! <3
Comment from Tatarka2
While I enjoyed the "alternative" formatting, I must admit I found this poem confusing to read, thus the message was somewhat lost on me. I do admit that this may be because I'm not accustomed to this type of poetry.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
While I enjoyed the "alternative" formatting, I must admit I found this poem confusing to read, thus the message was somewhat lost on me. I do admit that this may be because I'm not accustomed to this type of poetry.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
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I know but a 4.. Still stings. Curious if you're viewing it as it was intended to be viewed.
Oh well.. It happens. Can't please everyone nor did I expect everyone to "get it" per se.
Thanks for reviewing though!!!
Comment from Acquired Taste
Looks like the IRS manual...or Medicare guidelines.
Now, I viewed this on classicfanstory and it was useless - alternatively, this isn't much better, but there does seem to be a pattern. The outline of a fish with those three air bubbles is cute and creative - thus my 5 rating. Good luck. AT=/
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
Looks like the IRS manual...or Medicare guidelines.
Now, I viewed this on classicfanstory and it was useless - alternatively, this isn't much better, but there does seem to be a pattern. The outline of a fish with those three air bubbles is cute and creative - thus my 5 rating. Good luck. AT=/
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
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Hmm.. Thanks? Lol!! ;)
Comment from JJ Rowe
Nice one! Very creative idea. You should challenge yourself to do a bunch of animals for a children's book. That'd be fun to read.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
Nice one! Very creative idea. You should challenge yourself to do a bunch of animals for a children's book. That'd be fun to read.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2015
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Lol!! Holy cow!! Quite the task that would be!!!
Thanks for the review!!! :) <3
Comment from kiwijenny
This looks fishy to me:o)
Are you sure you haven't won before...was there a pole ..did you use a hook? To write what took
Sorry my hand just shook..I digress I love this fishy look
God bless
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
This looks fishy to me:o)
Are you sure you haven't won before...was there a pole ..did you use a hook? To write what took
Sorry my hand just shook..I digress I love this fishy look
God bless
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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I don't think I've ever laughed so hard at a review!! LOL!!!
PS- Thank you!!!!!
Comment from LeannaP
Interesting one
Its nice to see that the words you choose
become the poem itself in the form of a illustration!
It was a little bit derailing to read as it is in the shape of a fish
and i'm not intellectually sure on how one
should go about reading it.
I did however enjoy the uniqueness of this entry.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
Interesting one
Its nice to see that the words you choose
become the poem itself in the form of a illustration!
It was a little bit derailing to read as it is in the shape of a fish
and i'm not intellectually sure on how one
should go about reading it.
I did however enjoy the uniqueness of this entry.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Dustybones
Very cute presentation using the words to form a fish. This could be some new type of poetry format. I like it, and you put a smile on my morning grumpy face.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
Very cute presentation using the words to form a fish. This could be some new type of poetry format. I like it, and you put a smile on my morning grumpy face.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thank you!!!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Debra White
Hiya :)
I won't even ask how long it took you to get the formatting just so, to create the perfect fish! And with air bubbles too!
Cute little poem, brilliantly creative presentation.
Good luck in the voting booth :)
Kind regards, Debra
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
Hiya :)
I won't even ask how long it took you to get the formatting just so, to create the perfect fish! And with air bubbles too!
Cute little poem, brilliantly creative presentation.
Good luck in the voting booth :)
Kind regards, Debra
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Long enough!LOL!! ;)
Thanks for the review - much appreciated!!!
Comment from gypsymoth
You are so clever. There are 'golf widows', I'm guessing you're a widow of a fisherman. You've got my vote for the contest.
Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
You are so clever. There are 'golf widows', I'm guessing you're a widow of a fisherman. You've got my vote for the contest.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Lmao.. No, however, I'll likely be one someday. :O
Let's hope it's not at my own hands though!!! ;)
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mystery Poet
Clever and creative. LOL A poem for fun which also complies with the contest rules. Love the innuendo in your title. Definitely a contender for high placement. I would have thought this contest would have filled in an instant. Well done. The best of luck. Lovinia xoxo
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
Hi Mystery Poet
Clever and creative. LOL A poem for fun which also complies with the contest rules. Love the innuendo in your title. Definitely a contender for high placement. I would have thought this contest would have filled in an instant. Well done. The best of luck. Lovinia xoxo
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Thank you!!! ;)