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Hmmm. Well, I guess it's nice to see that some things haven't changed a bit on this site. It kind of makes me feel like I haven't been gone at all, actually. :)
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Hmmm. Well, I guess it's nice to see that some things haven't changed a bit on this site. It kind of makes me feel like I haven't been gone at all, actually. :)
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Thankz for that.
"At the time the library was closing so, I cut and pasted the title."
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Category: Children Fiction | Posted: January 31, 2015 | Chapters: Prologue -1-
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A chapter in the book ShedMoreTears Fairy Tales@Fables"
The Story of Nim-Niamia!
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"The Story of Nim-Niami!"
{The Flower Child}
{Chapter # One}
"The Flower, the Sun, and the Bee."
By Ricky1024
<><><><><><><><><>Created 11-26-2014<><><><><><><><><><><>
"One fine day in the month of March but before April and May...
Nim-Niania {the Flower Child} went out to play!
"She played with a bee in a tree and always talked in Chinese to 'The River Spirit.'
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"Don't be late for dinner Nim. Said her mother Niomi-Niami.
I won't mommy-san, I am going to play with the bee in the tree and speak to the 'River Spirit and God "Zin-ZU".
Bye...
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"Nim played by the river and tended asll of the Gardens in her town of "Shim-Niaminomi" in the southern providence of China."
"She talked to 'Zin-zu the river god' about many thing in her native Language."
"Can neechwah!' {Hello and how are you!}
"Nia-vim-isu, Can-nia-metoo! { I am good and how are you too?}
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"Hello ye-all and welcome back to Story #3 and Chapter #1 of Ricky's amazing second book 'Shed a Tear Again, Fairy tales and Fables!"
"I am Annie Oakley The Greatest Sharp-shooter west of the Mississippi!"
{Ricky's Narrarato} and today's story is about a little girl searching deep for love and marriage"
"See you at the end for the message and lesson to be learned cow-kids!"
"Bye-Ye-all!"
Annie...
"Thanks Annie and as I progress deeper ...
"'Zin-zu was always a good listener.'
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"Follows with Chapter #2 "The story of Nim-Niami and God's Garden of Miss-delights!
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Comment from MusingsOfMWH
Wow. This is certainly a colorful, if very short, story--a stunning butterfly, I must say. Did you take the photo? It's magnificent.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
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Wow. This is certainly a colorful, if very short, story--a stunning butterfly, I must say. Did you take the photo? It's magnificent.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
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No I have to start it tomorrow.
Time was short, thankz..
. Ricky.
