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"The Gift of Life Two."

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A book of beautiful poetry about life.

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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This is a heart-breaking poem about your beloved son, Jason. I extend my sympathies for your great loss. I know how it is to lose a child, and this reflects some of the anguish. Bet regards, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015

    thanks and much appriciated..
    ricky1024
Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Hi ricky1024

Sounds like a broken relationship that won't be fixed anytime soon ... Good way to tell a story like this, through the medium of a poem.

Patrick

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2015

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2015
    Thankz so much Pat,
    And yes, a loss is a loss and irretrievable.
    ricky1024.