Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

This is good--glad she got what she deserved. LOL, I have to read the other chapters. It's a bit violent for a children's fable--but remembering Grim brothers, it is okay for older children.
One thing I missed: "Get her cowboy!(you need quotes and yell(ed)Yell Annie..(one more period)
:) I will be waiting for more. If I see them, I'll read them

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2016

Thanks Rasmine, most of the stories involve death but Heaven
Also the cruelity is to preaent.
"The Lesson of the Day."
Ricky by the Bay.

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

Hello, my friend. I see you are still writing and you must be enjoying it. I too am enjoying it as I read this interesting story. I enjoyed the humorous narration and the way it was told. It held my attention very well. I look forward to the next part, my friend.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015

Thanks Eigle Rull, Chapter two of the
"Shed a Tear Book Two" will be done
in a few minutes!"
Thankz!
ricky1024.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ricky, great introduction mate...I noticed some SPAG.....good luck with the book, cheers Fez


"He thinks as he notice(s..or d) a person sitting down by a wall."

"Glad to here(hear) it but you will now need to learn how to take better care of yourself. "

"The next ten years Dexter goes through a sever(e) and rigorous training to become a high Ranked Guardian"

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2015

Thanks as grammar
its not my "prorate!
Ricky1024.

reply by Walu Feral on 23-Jan-2015

Mine also mate, cheers Fez