Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Very nice spiritual poem about change in life. None of us is assured to have another day yet alone a long life. May we live our lives so when it coming to the end we will not have regrets. Blessings and good luck in the contest, Patricia

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Some futures will fade

Life's path rearranged

The dash between a birth and a death on the tombstone is a path...it is fragile but very real
Well penned
God bless

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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Comment from Travis64

Excellent

Nice rhyming pattern; and a great message conveyed here as well as lessons to be learned if they haven't been learned already. Best wishes in the contest!

~Travis64

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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Thank you!!