The Lesson
Three Quatrains23 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
Life is for play and often we do forget. I do, especially on planes because I hate flying- not a fear of it, I just have inner ear problems. They don't like to pop and after a flight, my head is like an aquarium for days. To be like that child makes every day a journey that is much more than from point a to point b.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Life is for play and often we do forget. I do, especially on planes because I hate flying- not a fear of it, I just have inner ear problems. They don't like to pop and after a flight, my head is like an aquarium for days. To be like that child makes every day a journey that is much more than from point a to point b.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Ed. Not too keen on flying either. A mind-numbing experience as a passenger, though I enjoyed my sixteen years doing it professionally as a navigator..
Comment from Treischel
Wonderful sentiment eloquently expressed int this endearing poem written in enveloping rhyme, that reminds us of the joy of children who frolic at play. It always gladdens my heart too.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Wonderful sentiment eloquently expressed int this endearing poem written in enveloping rhyme, that reminds us of the joy of children who frolic at play. It always gladdens my heart too.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Tom. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Aw, doesn't that picture make you just want to run out there in the rain and splash around a bit... Another poem is spot on, Tony. We could all do with that lesson on enjoying life before it is too late, Giddy
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Aw, doesn't that picture make you just want to run out there in the rain and splash around a bit... Another poem is spot on, Tony. We could all do with that lesson on enjoying life before it is too late, Giddy
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Children have a way of reminding us of what is important!
Comment from Irish Rain
So true, and children know this. Why should they sit still when right outside their limits...waits LIFE! Would that we could still approach every day this way! Wonderful!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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So true, and children know this. Why should they sit still when right outside their limits...waits LIFE! Would that we could still approach every day this way! Wonderful!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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You're right, Jo. Children have a way of reminding us of what is important!
Comment from BeasPeas
An adorable child image to accompany your well-written, interesting, and profound poem. These are wonderful lines to remember always in our lives:
"Innately we know that life is for play;
Meanderings give the greatest delight.
They do not alter the length of the flight
But they make each day a little less grey."
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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An adorable child image to accompany your well-written, interesting, and profound poem. These are wonderful lines to remember always in our lives:
"Innately we know that life is for play;
Meanderings give the greatest delight.
They do not alter the length of the flight
But they make each day a little less grey."
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thanks, BeasPeas. Yes, children do have a way of reminding us what is important.
Comment from Cajungirl
If we can only grow up and keep of childhood adventurous mind I think the world would be a much happier place. Lovely poem. Have a wonderful New Year.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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If we can only grow up and keep of childhood adventurous mind I think the world would be a much happier place. Lovely poem. Have a wonderful New Year.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Cajungirl. Yes, children do have a way of reminding us what is important. Happy New Year to you, too.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your poem makes a lot of sense, it is a play being acted out from our birth to our death. It is what role we wish to choose that makes the difference in where we stand. Excellent poem, Tony, and a pleasure to read. xsx sandra
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Your poem makes a lot of sense, it is a play being acted out from our birth to our death. It is what role we wish to choose that makes the difference in where we stand. Excellent poem, Tony, and a pleasure to read. xsx sandra
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Thanks, Sandra. I appreciate your kind review. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from Just2Write
Yes m'dear - it is the moments of play and joy that make our days less grey - and help the passage of time a much more pleasant thing - especially when sitting in an aircraft.
Another lovely write, Tony. I always enjoy seeing the world through your eyes.
Rose.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Yes m'dear - it is the moments of play and joy that make our days less grey - and help the passage of time a much more pleasant thing - especially when sitting in an aircraft.
Another lovely write, Tony. I always enjoy seeing the world through your eyes.
Rose.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Another lovely comment, Rose. Thank you so much! Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from sunnilicious
Cute photograph. Good reflection made about life. So deep with wisdom. Well thought out and clearly written. Good rhymes. Nice work.
Hope your holidays went well. Happy New Year. Peace :)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Cute photograph. Good reflection made about life. So deep with wisdom. Well thought out and clearly written. Good rhymes. Nice work.
Hope your holidays went well. Happy New Year. Peace :)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thanks, sunnilicious, for your very kind review and good wishes, which are reciprocated.
Comment from kittykatnoel
The picture you have chosen is so perfect. Children definitely bring a lot of color and adventure to the world. Winter break is 3 more days, this has been a very adventurous and colorful two weeks with kids out of school. Thank you for sharing your writing.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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The picture you have chosen is so perfect. Children definitely bring a lot of color and adventure to the world. Winter break is 3 more days, this has been a very adventurous and colorful two weeks with kids out of school. Thank you for sharing your writing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thanks, kittykatnoel. I appreciate your review. Children have a way of restoring our perspective.