A Lovely Day In Dean's Neighborhood
A Short Story Of Intrigue and Chicanery26 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
This is some nutty stuff, Mikey. Very imaginative and funny. Poor Dean--everyone's taking a whack at him. But sucking the horror from his brain is very good--and replacing it with sweetness and light? Brilliant!
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This is some nutty stuff, Mikey. Very imaginative and funny. Poor Dean--everyone's taking a whack at him. But sucking the horror from his brain is very good--and replacing it with sweetness and light? Brilliant!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
Comment from Acquired Taste
I only hope there is a story about Father Rafferty's Kidneys. That's a terrific writing prompt if ever I heard one. Maybe Dean will take it and develop it into a children's series?
This is terrific - scary that it might be true. You've done a great job with this and it is truly a fun read. More
so because we know the characters. Great wishes for the contest. Jean
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I only hope there is a story about Father Rafferty's Kidneys. That's a terrific writing prompt if ever I heard one. Maybe Dean will take it and develop it into a children's series?
This is terrific - scary that it might be true. You've done a great job with this and it is truly a fun read. More
so because we know the characters. Great wishes for the contest. Jean
Comment Written 17-Jan-2015
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this Inside the mind of Dean Kuch contest entry is hilarious. Dean can use a friendly smack down once I a while. I didn't get to review this before Tom cleaned out my messages at the end of the year. Of course, all of this attention feeds his ample ego. LOL. Nice job. All the best in the contest. :0 GraceieAnn
For fun, read Aquired Taste's entry.
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Mikey, this Inside the mind of Dean Kuch contest entry is hilarious. Dean can use a friendly smack down once I a while. I didn't get to review this before Tom cleaned out my messages at the end of the year. Of course, all of this attention feeds his ample ego. LOL. Nice job. All the best in the contest. :0 GraceieAnn
For fun, read Aquired Taste's entry.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
Comment from Sasha
You got my last 6 and it was more than well deserved. You did a terrific job with this one. Dynamite dialogue, awesome imagination and written so cleverly and with marvelous humor. I bet Dean just loves this one. Great contest and I think you just might win this one.
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You got my last 6 and it was more than well deserved. You did a terrific job with this one. Dynamite dialogue, awesome imagination and written so cleverly and with marvelous humor. I bet Dean just loves this one. Great contest and I think you just might win this one.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
Comment from Joe_P
A snapshot of the deliberating going on inside the head of one obsessed. Such a busy mind. Questions with unacceptable answers. You have an interesting concept of the use of caps and italics. I have to say that nobody else writes the way you do. Keep it up!
Joe_P
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A snapshot of the deliberating going on inside the head of one obsessed. Such a busy mind. Questions with unacceptable answers. You have an interesting concept of the use of caps and italics. I have to say that nobody else writes the way you do. Keep it up!
Joe_P
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
Comment from comanalbert
Drawn by the author's fame and allured by Dean's style of everything, I hoped this is not Mike posting about Kuch.
I'm sorry.
I've lost it since Edgar came in, but this was too good to let go. I'll catch up tomorrow, only Dean can beat the FS wow factor, beat to pulp, that is.
Great stuff, I'm joining the contest if I'm not too late.
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Drawn by the author's fame and allured by Dean's style of everything, I hoped this is not Mike posting about Kuch.
I'm sorry.
I've lost it since Edgar came in, but this was too good to let go. I'll catch up tomorrow, only Dean can beat the FS wow factor, beat to pulp, that is.
Great stuff, I'm joining the contest if I'm not too late.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Pleasant howls of laughter- awoooo! You truly have a gift for humor. Just hope you do not end up hacked to bits and packed in the freezer. Seriously, crying at Fried Green Tomatoes? A six if I had one. I'm sure Dean sees this as a Christmas gift.
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Pleasant howls of laughter- awoooo! You truly have a gift for humor. Just hope you do not end up hacked to bits and packed in the freezer. Seriously, crying at Fried Green Tomatoes? A six if I had one. I'm sure Dean sees this as a Christmas gift.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
Comment from emrpoems
I doesn't get better than this. you did get inside of Dean's head and did a fantastic job
Wackydo: "Well, there'll be other contests, Mikey. Dean is hard to beat." You should have listened to me, Mikey. I told you, it isn't the subject matter you need from his brain, it's the talent. Great lines
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I doesn't get better than this. you did get inside of Dean's head and did a fantastic job
Wackydo: "Well, there'll be other contests, Mikey. Dean is hard to beat." You should have listened to me, Mikey. I told you, it isn't the subject matter you need from his brain, it's the talent. Great lines
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
It just doesnot get any better than this. A totally off the wall, original tale thouroughly ebgaging and hilarius. In spite of all the shenanigans, dean's superior talent still wins the day!!! Genius. NG
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It just doesnot get any better than this. A totally off the wall, original tale thouroughly ebgaging and hilarius. In spite of all the shenanigans, dean's superior talent still wins the day!!! Genius. NG
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh my goodness! We have another Dean! I bet he loved it. This was so good, Mikey. I loved it, now I won't bother trying to get into his brain, not now I know what's in it! What an imagination you have got, Mikey, that was brilliant! Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra
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Oh my goodness! We have another Dean! I bet he loved it. This was so good, Mikey. I loved it, now I won't bother trying to get into his brain, not now I know what's in it! What an imagination you have got, Mikey, that was brilliant! Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014