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Many bedtime stories for children.

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Comment from RGstar
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a nice family story which highlights the joys of giving as well as receiving. The giving part is of special interest t me, as it is a part I love.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine
Comment from Bryana
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I'm sure Gran would be happy with anything
the grandchildren give her. I love anything related
to Christmas, gifts, stories, but most of all
the happiness of children.

Hugs my friend.,

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a nice week. Hugs, Ine
Comment from judiverse
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You get across the idea of the wonderful family Christmas and that it's nice to give presents, just as it is to receive them. Great description of Grandmother's reaction to her gift. With our family, the children have the task of handing out the gifts, so they can't jump right into opening theirs. Nice warm family setting. Leave off the "in" in the sentence "They are nice and warm slippers in." judi

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your kind review and your tip, I will check. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Treischel
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Yes, that is exactly the way it works. There is joy in both the giving and the receiving. You convey the atmosphere of Christmas Day quite well. Doesn't some of the tradition emanate from Holland? Like the Yule log and mistletoe?

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Well in the Netherlands nowadys half of the families celebrate sinterklaas, the other half Christmas.
Comment from amada
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Thank you for sharing with us this beautiful story of your Christmas. You write with the heart telling of the love between your family. Sharing your blessings. Thank you.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from BeasPeas
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Very nice. Yes, it is just a much fun and rewarding to give a gift as to receive one. Love the expression, "over the moon," as it surely describes such a happy experience.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from l.raven
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HI Ine, I would rather get a homemade present from the kids than one you have to buy...such a sweet story told...I love it...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely week, Ine
reply by l.raven on 15-Dec-2014
    you are so welcome Ine....and you have a lovely week too!!! xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for sharing one of your "Bedtime stories" and cleo85's charming artwork. I appreciate your reminding us that it is equally satisfying to give and to receive presents. Enjoy the gift giving season- Joan

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your kind review, Joan. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from godlucifer
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we are zoom to our presents. christmas is a experience,experience of giving and receiving. we are zoom to this experience and the gathering around christmas time is a joyful of experience to remember. your story is well willingly written and it was nice to see the happy times. i enjoyed n reading your story. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your lovely and kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine
Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi Ine, you have written a lovely Christmas story. Including all the family and the joy of celebrating together. Family is so important at this time of the year, and the children will have wonderful memories when they grow up.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. And have a lovely week, Ine