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Spenserian Sonnet Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
A Spenserian Sonnet has such a great sound, which you've accomplished here. The rhyming scheme flows quite naturally. A poem about love, beauty expressed in a Edmund Spenser works well here. Great job! Les
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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A Spenserian Sonnet has such a great sound, which you've accomplished here. The rhyming scheme flows quite naturally. A poem about love, beauty expressed in a Edmund Spenser works well here. Great job! Les
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from Ronni
Very lovely and enchantingly romantic sonnet, comparing
one's own loved one and their life together, that has
yielded a very happy and fulfilled relationship and
their later crop harvest of wonderful children, with
the sunshine of wife as the perfect combination of
a blissfully happy life and future. Perfect picture
ties in the theme and flow of this rich, beautiful
growth and love yielding to it sunniest treasures.
Thanks for sharing...best of luck in contest!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Very lovely and enchantingly romantic sonnet, comparing
one's own loved one and their life together, that has
yielded a very happy and fulfilled relationship and
their later crop harvest of wonderful children, with
the sunshine of wife as the perfect combination of
a blissfully happy life and future. Perfect picture
ties in the theme and flow of this rich, beautiful
growth and love yielding to it sunniest treasures.
Thanks for sharing...best of luck in contest!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the great review.
Steve
Comment from djsaxon
Adherence to the Spenserian form. There is no real volta or conclusion, rather a gentle through line that is devoid of any tension and therefore, no resolution. The couplet is merely an affirmation of all that has gone before. Cheers - DJ
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Adherence to the Spenserian form. There is no real volta or conclusion, rather a gentle through line that is devoid of any tension and therefore, no resolution. The couplet is merely an affirmation of all that has gone before. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from GE Parson
Very good sonnet. Makes one fee nice ad warmish
and even a little romantic.
It is well written with excellent descriptive words.
I did not detect any scabs.
G.E. Parson
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Very good sonnet. Makes one fee nice ad warmish
and even a little romantic.
It is well written with excellent descriptive words.
I did not detect any scabs.
G.E. Parson
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from seaglass
This is a lovely tribute in sonnet form to the sun. We take the life source of our sun-star for granted. It is necessary survival of the planet. It's understandable how primitive people believed in it as a deity.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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This is a lovely tribute in sonnet form to the sun. We take the life source of our sun-star for granted. It is necessary survival of the planet. It's understandable how primitive people believed in it as a deity.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from Erys
Is wonderful this sun that shines for all, which gives itself for free. Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it.
Sunny days and good luck to you!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Is wonderful this sun that shines for all, which gives itself for free. Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing it.
Sunny days and good luck to you!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from Nosha17
A lovely homage to Nature and all her wonders. Sunshine is an essential part of our lives and without it life would not be possible. Good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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A lovely homage to Nature and all her wonders. Sunshine is an essential part of our lives and without it life would not be possible. Good use of rhyming and imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thank you.
Steve