Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "An Owl's Perspective"A collection of sonnets
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Comment from Gargantuan2
This is different from what I have come to expect. An interesting viewpoint to a life's situation, but in poetry. I think I prefer the stories to the style of poem chosen here, but it is not bad.. just unexpected as I said
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This is different from what I have come to expect. An interesting viewpoint to a life's situation, but in poetry. I think I prefer the stories to the style of poem chosen here, but it is not bad.. just unexpected as I said
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from seaglass
This is a really cool poem. Undertones say much. Passion, especially that which involves forbidden love, overwhelms reasoning. it always has devastating aftereffect.
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This is a really cool poem. Undertones say much. Passion, especially that which involves forbidden love, overwhelms reasoning. it always has devastating aftereffect.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from angelface2
OH dear. What a bad boy! Better listen to that wise old owl, if he had his eye on you. teehee. Poem is nicely written, Mike. Blessings! Miss Sally
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OH dear. What a bad boy! Better listen to that wise old owl, if he had his eye on you. teehee. Poem is nicely written, Mike. Blessings! Miss Sally
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very sonnet-like, Mikey. When the cat's away, the mice will play. The main problem with that particular theory here is that owls -- wise or otherwise -- love to eat mice, as it were. And by the sound of things, this philandering Romeo is going to be made to eat crow one day, and very soon.
Good rhyming paired with an awesome presentation. That photo of the owl and the mouse is gr-r-r-r-r-e-a-t!
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Very sonnet-like, Mikey. When the cat's away, the mice will play. The main problem with that particular theory here is that owls -- wise or otherwise -- love to eat mice, as it were. And by the sound of things, this philandering Romeo is going to be made to eat crow one day, and very soon.
Good rhyming paired with an awesome presentation. That photo of the owl and the mouse is gr-r-r-r-r-e-a-t!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, I swear...your wording just sweeps a reader off their feet...it pulls you in...and the journey is on...the owl sees all...what a night to remember...a great poem you...Love it!!! very well expressed...well done...Luff Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, I swear...your wording just sweeps a reader off their feet...it pulls you in...and the journey is on...the owl sees all...what a night to remember...a great poem you...Love it!!! very well expressed...well done...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
You hung by your finger tips scared to death and the irony is, come daylight you were only inches from the ground, mud and everyone is blowing their car horns, laughing.
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You hung by your finger tips scared to death and the irony is, come daylight you were only inches from the ground, mud and everyone is blowing their car horns, laughing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from acerisestory
The owl knows all! Those eyes burning holes were holes of guilt, no doubt.
Your poem is perfectly rhymed, Michael, and your meter is spot on. You've used great alliteration with stares/sneak; seems/secrets; first/fevered; seemed/stars. I was especially entertained by your third stanza :)
"I dove through bedroom window; he yelled 'SCUM!'"
Well done, my friend! Take care. Alana
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The owl knows all! Those eyes burning holes were holes of guilt, no doubt.
Your poem is perfectly rhymed, Michael, and your meter is spot on. You've used great alliteration with stares/sneak; seems/secrets; first/fevered; seemed/stars. I was especially entertained by your third stanza :)
"I dove through bedroom window; he yelled 'SCUM!'"
Well done, my friend! Take care. Alana
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem The wise owl knew what would happen. You pushed carnal life too far. That last part should have learned you to keep away. The lust should die pretty fast. Then maybe you will not. Great work. I know the poem is not biographical.
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I love the picture. I love the poem The wise owl knew what would happen. You pushed carnal life too far. That last part should have learned you to keep away. The lust should die pretty fast. Then maybe you will not. Great work. I know the poem is not biographical.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Flawless form on this one. You have this meter down cold. Your rhyme is always perfect. Great use of language to tell your story. This reads beautifully out loud. So exceptional!
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Flawless form on this one. You have this meter down cold. Your rhyme is always perfect. Great use of language to tell your story. This reads beautifully out loud. So exceptional!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
Comment from emrpoems
What is done in the dark always comes to light. A well done sonnet form
were those few moments of pleasure worth the lifetime o bad memories?
Well paired picture and poem
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What is done in the dark always comes to light. A well done sonnet form
were those few moments of pleasure worth the lifetime o bad memories?
Well paired picture and poem
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
