Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Love your poem. It is hilarious and makes my day. It would be awesome if pigeons would do this all the time,it would help the police catch criminals.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Wouldn't that be a lark. (no pun intended)

Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Hi, Shari.
This is very funny. You have such talent writing these poems and capturing the humour. The picture you picked is perfect.
Bye
Rosalyne :)

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thanks again, Rosalyne.

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

Goodness, that is one creepy picture. Hahaha. It looks like an insane cat swallowing a rabid rat amongst other things. I think I'll go crazier if I continue to stare at it. This cracked me up. Love all the clever references. "Stool" pigeon, bird "duty"... Tooo funny. This would win a funny animal contest. Well, if you could find an intelligent voting block. :) mikey

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Hey, you're winning multi-contests. Don't insult your groupies. :-) That splotch on the car does look like a psyche tool for interpretation.

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Spitfire, Very good, very cute, especially ...

marks criminal's car

(The bird must do his duty ...

And not just to the criminal's car, but my car as I was slowly inching it out of my garage. Talk about precision, those nasty birds "dutied" my car in about one second - lol.)

A fun poem. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thanks, LB. Sounds as if your car was target practice. Better it than you. :-)

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

stool pigeon
marks criminal's car
bird duty

Ha! just looking at the title, I knew this one would be funny. I love the irony of the stool pigeon pooping on the criminal's car. It was his duty! 8-)

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

You got it, BG. Spot on. LOL

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

A birdelicious duty well done! Pigeons deserve more credit than they get. They were used up to World War 1 as carriers of messages. Love the last line. Awesome closer. Les

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thanks, Les. I had forgotten about carrier pigeons.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Stool pigeon uses pigeon stool to mark the car. LOL! Love it. Did you notice the white poop in the picture looks like an evil face? Creepy.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

I thought that too, Phyllis. So far, you're the only one to mention it.

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Haha, that's funny. You did a great job and I think you should do a poem about a bird actually pooping on someone. Great job friend

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Umm, I can think of a few on this site that I'd like to target. :-)

Comment from rjpurdy

Excellent

Hah! Your senryu is in good form with strong descriptors and an excellent satori. Your words poke fun in a harmless way which is the hallmark of true senryu. Nicely done. rj

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

Thanks, rj, for your encouraging review.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This is funny, especially if the car truly belongs to a deserving soul. Pigeons and seagulls aren't selective. I been blessed by their donations more than once. lol

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

Donations. Good one, seaglass. :-)