Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Colourful Stroll"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
7 total reviews
Comment from livelylinda
playinaround: you seem to strive for originality and you certainly meet your goal. Congratulations on your contest win. Another lovely write leaving the reader with calm, comfort and a gentle smile. Lovely. livelylinda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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playinaround: you seem to strive for originality and you certainly meet your goal. Congratulations on your contest win. Another lovely write leaving the reader with calm, comfort and a gentle smile. Lovely. livelylinda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much livelylinda, for your kind words and generous review!
Comment from emrpoems
Congrats on your win.
A whole image created in only six words
An impressive presentation'
Autumn's
captivating
sunset
Mirrors
fallen
leaves
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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Congrats on your win.
A whole image created in only six words
An impressive presentation'
Autumn's
captivating
sunset
Mirrors
fallen
leaves
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014
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emrpoems, thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your six words portray well the of autumn leaves reflecting like a sunset
what can one say in six words you do it well
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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good luck in the contest
your six words portray well the of autumn leaves reflecting like a sunset
what can one say in six words you do it well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Smothiecool!
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welcome...SC
Comment from Dr. Nad
Colourful Stroll is a short succinct splendid six word smorgasboard of special shimmering sights. Thanks
May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Colourful Stroll is a short succinct splendid six word smorgasboard of special shimmering sights. Thanks
May God Bless you, have a Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Dr Nad!!
You are very welcome, Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a very well done 6 word contest entry. I love the theme, the illustration and the words are really lovely. I do love the Autumnal scenes. Good luck in this contest. :) Sandra.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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This is a very well done 6 word contest entry. I love the theme, the illustration and the words are really lovely. I do love the Autumnal scenes. Good luck in this contest. :) Sandra.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you Sandra!
Comment from mfowler
Lovely artwork; important with this many words to use
Your single grab of comparing autumn sunsets to reflected fallen leaves is very evocative and easily creates a mind picture for the reader
Interesting structure, 'reflecting' the comparison of scenes
A well spent six words
Good Luck
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Lovely artwork; important with this many words to use
Your single grab of comparing autumn sunsets to reflected fallen leaves is very evocative and easily creates a mind picture for the reader
Interesting structure, 'reflecting' the comparison of scenes
A well spent six words
Good Luck
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you mfowler!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful six word poem, mystery writer, wonderful imagery presented through the words and the picture. excellent pairing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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this is a beautiful six word poem, mystery writer, wonderful imagery presented through the words and the picture. excellent pairing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much sweetwoodjax!!