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Comment from lindalcreel
This was wonderful. I would have never thought to do something like this, but it really works. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with the rest of us.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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This was wonderful. I would have never thought to do something like this, but it really works. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with the rest of us.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Linda. It's nice to hear good things from great authors. You're very kind.
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My pleasure:)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Bill - this is unique and well penned, I loved how you crafted this one, simple lines and yet such depth. Great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Dear Bill - this is unique and well penned, I loved how you crafted this one, simple lines and yet such depth. Great job.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Maureen. Not many reviewers noted the antonym end words. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah...Antonym...Ann Tonnim. Now, this little ditty took a bit of thought, considering your poem is full of them...antonyms, I mean.
Great pic accompanying it, too!
Great stuff, Bill. Very creative...~Dean
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Hah...Antonym...Ann Tonnim. Now, this little ditty took a bit of thought, considering your poem is full of them...antonyms, I mean.
Great pic accompanying it, too!
Great stuff, Bill. Very creative...~Dean
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Dean, for giving this a look. Bill
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Did I get it right? The "antonym" part, I mean?
Just sayin...???
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Yes. Every pair of lines' end words are antonyms to each other. You are the first to notice.
Comment from kanimozhi T
Beautiful art pair. I mean the poem and the picture. So nice. And, I appreciate your enjoyable technique. Well chosen. Finely written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Beautiful art pair. I mean the poem and the picture. So nice. And, I appreciate your enjoyable technique. Well chosen. Finely written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Bill, this is a fascinating poem my friend, very clever name you have in there Antonym, Love the way you have set out your poem, there are a lot of factors in there to be appreciated.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Hi Bill, this is a fascinating poem my friend, very clever name you have in there Antonym, Love the way you have set out your poem, there are a lot of factors in there to be appreciated.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Eric, for the kind review. Bill
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It was my pleasure Bill.
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It was my pleasure Bill.
Comment from adewpearl
fascinating artwork to complement your poem
good use of enjambment to carry thought from line to line in this intriguing poetic portrait
Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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fascinating artwork to complement your poem
good use of enjambment to carry thought from line to line in this intriguing poetic portrait
Brooke
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Brooke, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Glasstruth
Like how you arranged your lines. As for romance, it seems to be of losing someone you desired. Interesting how you mentioned a name. Personalizes it. Also, how you associate the phrases of devil and angel makes this very unique. Well done. Les
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Like how you arranged your lines. As for romance, it seems to be of losing someone you desired. Interesting how you mentioned a name. Personalizes it. Also, how you associate the phrases of devil and angel makes this very unique. Well done. Les
Comment Written 21-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Ann Tonnim (antonym) Thank you, Les, for the kind review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
HI Bill,
Simplistic and sophisticated artwork with this classy poem makes for a great read and presentation.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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HI Bill,
Simplistic and sophisticated artwork with this classy poem makes for a great read and presentation.
Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Ann Tonnim (antonym) Thank you, Jax, for the kind review.
Comment from krys123
Bill;
truly a magnificent creative and inventive imagination, resourceful and definitive concept and idea,
a very well written romantic piece of poetry, outstanding graphic picture that represents the feelings of your poem.
These are just a few of the traits and qualities that I found that you displayed in your writing. I enjoyed this immensely and I'm not just saying at this is really well done.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and Godspeed.
Alex
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Bill;
truly a magnificent creative and inventive imagination, resourceful and definitive concept and idea,
a very well written romantic piece of poetry, outstanding graphic picture that represents the feelings of your poem.
These are just a few of the traits and qualities that I found that you displayed in your writing. I enjoyed this immensely and I'm not just saying at this is really well done.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and Godspeed.
Alex
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014
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Ann Tonnim (antonym) Thank you, Alex, for the kind review.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Tricky my friend!!I was wondering who the h-ll was "Ann Tonnim" Still did not register then a did a google search for Ann Tonnim. Then I felt like a real idiot lol I have to give you a six because I really liked the trick.
TK
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Tricky my friend!!I was wondering who the h-ll was "Ann Tonnim" Still did not register then a did a google search for Ann Tonnim. Then I felt like a real idiot lol I have to give you a six because I really liked the trick.
TK
Comment Written 20-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2014
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Thank you, TK, for giving this one a going over. I appreciate the terrific review. Bill