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Comment from CR Delport
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But what really is a fair price, and will you get your money's worth? I make postings of my book in roughly 800 word segments and offer 82 cents with sometimes a chance of more. Is that fair? Well done poem.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Yeah well yours is pretty fair mate. 800 words is kind to us reviewers always leave us wanting more hehe! Bring em on sunshine! Thanks for the review.
Comment from royowen
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It's so true what you say, but It would be be very difficult to measure the varying degrees of payments Geoff, it wouldn't be easy to police! I think it always works out, I have reviewed works of 50 words with the same reward value as one I reviewed today with 3800 words, but it evens out in the end! Well done with this one, good write, wish you luck, bro, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Thanks Roy good to see you coming by. I agree with what you say. As I have said I am a sucker for a good read and even when the reward is low if the story is good I am 'in like Flynn' ok!
reply by royowen on 06-Nov-2014
    I love some of the excellent writing online, some good talent here, and we read it for free, including your excellent biography Bro, my daughter, son-in law and grandsons will be settling in Sydney I think, maybe we can meet somewhere! Blessings, bro, Roy.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    That would be n ice. You are in Adelaide right?
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    We are gonna meet "reaching for the stars" soon she is coming over to visit her sister I think. Or cousin. They live ion Baulkham Hills not all that far away from us we are in the City of Penrith on the Eastern Side. Right close to the Blue Mountains
reply by royowen on 06-Nov-2014
    That's where we are,
Comment from Jay Squires
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You'll have a lot of Fanstorians in agreement with you, Geoff.

The pay is tied to your ability to promote your own work. The sad thing is a person can cut and paste the same thing on all reviews and rack up the member dollars and pumps along the way and not even read the work that people pour their souls into. Others spend ten minutes to a half hour reading one piece and really giving thoughtful reviews... but it doesn't allow him/her enough time to earn a lot of bucks.

I like your poem for what it does to make us think, Geoff.

God Bless you!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    Thanks mate I am sorry to hear about the cut and paste folks. I mainly save up the cut and pastes for responses to reviews if there sare a heap of them on one page but I mostly do a personal response as you know.
Comment from bob cullen
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You sir are spot on.

This is a fun read and wonderfully Australian. Don't think I've reviewed your material before so I'll look back over a couple of your previous posts.

Whereabouts in Sydney my friend, I live at Camden.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
    Hey mate sorry I wrote a reply then forgot to save it. When people ask I always put on the snooty accent and with a flick of my wrist I say "Oh...we live in the Eastern Suburbs.....of Penrith! So not all that far from you mate. Appreciate the review will look for your stuff as I have time. Used to come down your way a lot when the folks were in Queen Victoria Nursing Home in Picton. If you read the Darby and Joan chapter of my autobiography (The Little Dog That Wouldn't let Go) you will see where i mention about wishi8ng the M7 etc was in a lot sooner hehe. hated the Northern Rd Luddenham Rd thing.
Comment from Michaelk
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Great poem. It really speaks of a truth for Fanstory. Your poem has good rhyme. I assume that ending each stanza with 'pay' was your way of saying that you wish everyone could be fair and offer review rewards. I liked the rhythm in your poem as well. It was smooth and had a nice cadence to it.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
    thanks Michaelk not sure we have met before. Seem to be acquiring morenew FS friends eery day. Appreciate the grea review. Will look for your stuff.
reply by Michaelk on 05-Nov-2014
    I look forward to it, thanks. :)
Comment from c_lucas
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I have certain writers that I review for base pay. They are individuals who have talent, but cannot afford to support their work. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
    Thanks mate I am always a sucker for a good story but like you when people constantly put up looooong stories with little or no reward it gets a bit tiresome. You do know you inspired this of course. God Bless and thanks for coming by.
reply by c_lucas on 06-Nov-2014
    You're welcome, Geoff. My stories tend to be on the long side, but I support them accordingly.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    ALways look forward to them mate.
reply by c_lucas on 06-Nov-2014
    They are a'coming Geoff. Charlie
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
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Good on you, Sankey! Very nicely written with wonderful sentiments. I don't think you needed author notes - your writing stands for itself and explains itself perfectly. Good job.

Anthony.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
    Ah well the old longwindicus always has to have the last ands the last and the last hehe word. Thanks mate where is your strange story about the guy at the old manor housew?
reply by Antoine Charlemaine on 05-Nov-2014
    Posting another chapter shortly. Stay tuned!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014
    ALways look forward to them mate.
Comment from mikemagine
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Very, very well done, my friend! Reading and writing poetry can be LOTS of fun, no doubt, and though that's true, unfortunately not everyone will share our experience...So leaving a hefty reward makes MUCH sense...

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
    Thanks mate appreciate the review. Good of you to come by. As I said I am not pressed for rewards but the same guy I quoted said if the rewards aren't there he won't read em. I am a sucker for a good story though hehe.
reply by mikemagine on 05-Nov-2014
    Okay.
Comment from patcelaw
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It is so hard to write and review. To move our work up as a new writer I find having to spend 6.55 dollars to move up 2 spots makes it difficult to build up dollars up to move us along so our writings are worth more to the reader.

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
    I understand new friend. Thanks for coming by. I have now been with FS for 16 months and I try and split up the writing and reviewing do a bit of reviewing then some writing and so on. As I said to another reviewer I am a sucker for a good story sometimes even if the rewards are not there. Will see if I can find your stuff ok!