Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Good NIght"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
3 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a lovely poem, but the first line of the last stanza is not in iambic meter. Contest rules say the poem must be written in "strict iambic meter." Although the syllable count is correct, the meter is not. May be time to fix it before contest close. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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This is a lovely poem, but the first line of the last stanza is not in iambic meter. Contest rules say the poem must be written in "strict iambic meter." Although the syllable count is correct, the meter is not. May be time to fix it before contest close. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Thank you Jeanie!
Comment from Nosha17
Guess, everyone is different, I detest the night time. Good use of imagery and rhyming to convey your thoughts. Good complimentary picture and good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Guess, everyone is different, I detest the night time. Good use of imagery and rhyming to convey your thoughts. Good complimentary picture and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Faye, for this kind and thoughtful review!
Comment from CR Delport
This is a very well written poem and you should do very well in the contest. It is well laid out and well presented. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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This is a very well written poem and you should do very well in the contest. It is well laid out and well presented. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for your encouragement and for this kind and thoughtful review!